Preditory Success

[Trill Stalker]

Vesperus
So You Think Your Worthy?

It hadn't taken me long to finish what Methodone had first sent me out to do. The day was still the same, and though long hours had passed by I hopes that my time had been reasonable for the brute. Avalon scantered on behind me, her faith in me was almost laughable. I had no innocence left in me, it had vanished along with my mother. "We are almost there." I said vocals still sweet and caring. Death Valley, my head quarters loomed menacingly over us, it had an almost living presence that made me even shiver at times. "Don't worry about how it looks Sweety, It's just the outside look so that no intruders want to enter willingly. The inside is much more appealing." It wasn't but the lie didn't tinge my words, I had long ago learned how to make everything dripping from my mouth sound like something you could trust.

What Methodone wanted with the little filly I wasn't too sure, and although she was a dear thing I really didn't care. It had been fun gathering her up but I was ready to move on. Ready for the next challenge. Maybe the next one would be harder, I hoped so. "Methodone!" I bellowed out as soon as I had wandered deep enough into the land that I was sure the little Avalon could not find the way out by herself. I turned and faced the little one, my features were still pleasant. "I want you to meet someone." I smiled but there was no emotion attached to it.

Word Count; 261 That was fun!

[lynx'']

I paced anxiously - all was silent, that was until kiki stirred from my poll and wound herway down my right foreleg, holding herself tight around my pillart and glaring at me with her beaded eyes. "He is returning - methodone. With the girl."

she hissed. A smirk spread to my jaw line and i gave an excited buck - calming instantly afterwards. Now i could go out to collect Christian. I snorted - and soon heard his call bellwo throughout the land. I returned with a horrific scream and leapt forward into a lope - making the distance easily.

His bright chestnut pelt came into veiw soon and i slided to a stop, snorting and tossing my skull. "where is she, Vesperus." I charmed, licking at my maw and looking around for her. Everything abuot me shone charm. It was the way i was built - the way i rolled. As it was the same with Vesp here and Flether - the other gang member. We were built for this job and i was so proud that already we had our first little girl. I glaced past him - to see a figure lurking in the distance. I half reared, tossing my skull in delight. "Come forward my sweetheart!" I cackled and landed back onto the earth softly. I received a warning hiss from my snake companion "Methodone! stop that now you'll scare her away. Control yourself - monster." Her voice was only for my ears but even so - she almost deafened me with her angered lyrics. I backed up a few steps - my cranium pushed into a scowl - i hated listening to her - but she knew best, of course. "Easy mission - Vesp? Or was she a devil to catch?" I wondered - with a hint of curiousity in my voice.

Character: Methodone
Status: complete
Word Count: 311
Comments: yes trill...its here, done and dusted xD


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[Nevaeh]

Avalon

As I half followed the bright flaxen chestnut stallion towards where we were going. as I heard some of his lyrics my greyish auds flicked backwards at some of the lyrics he said. Dark pillars moved across the invisible boarder to the land we where going into. As my black orbs looked around at this strange place which made me stand still, to my black orbs this place looked very scary to me. I then heard him say something, I then just gave a little snorted at what the bright chestnut said towards me. I turned my little grey crown away from Vesperus, I just did not wanted to look at him now. Hearing more hooves upon the ground coming towards me, and moved my little greyish body away from Vesperus, while I kept my auds back, while I kept myself standing where I was not moving my whole body at all. I knew I as easy enough to see from where I was standing, all I did was move out of the shadow a little bit not much, and as my greyish colored muzzle opened and my lyrics came out, You’re a liar.

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Nevvy’s Notes:
Horse: Avalon
Muse: Good
Comments: Not that good post. Blame Cat beining naughty, Phone ringing .
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[Trill Stalker]

Vesperus
So You Think Your Worthy?

Off in the distance a scream echoed, the sound made my lips peel into a grin. Methodone had heard my call and here he came. The seconds ticked by and finally he arrived in all his dark glory. Where is she, Vesperus. were the first words that came out of his mouth. As a reply I simply flicked my head to the side motioning to where Avalon stood a little distance away. I felt nothing as Methodone beckoned the little mare forward, I might have had fun with our first meeting but no more. I was cold, chilled to the bone, emotionless. My mother was gone and the world sucked. You'r a liar The soft words made me turn fully so that I could face Avalon. I let out a laugh that was mirthless. "Sweet little Avalon you still think the world is innocent." That laugh turned to a cackle, what did it matter if I was already half insane? I stalked forward my shoulders rolling like a predator's. "There is no heaven Hun, just hell. The world is always against you never forget that." I spat the last in her face not caring for my vulgar actions. Jerkily I faced Methodone my eyes were hollow and so wasn't my voice. "She was almost overly easy, very trusting. I never had a doubt that I would capture her." Dear Avalon had been almost too easy. It was over and done with now though, I was ready for my next hunt. I tilted my head to the side in an almost dead motion. Opening my dark mouth I asked. "What now Methodone?" Did I mention to him how on the fringe I truly was from loosing my mother or did I just keep the little sin to myself? Questions questions questions.

Word Count; 300 Sorry he had a little brake down there, if you haven't got it yet he is scarred over his mothers death. And Nev who is Amira? Because that is who you wrote she was.

[lynx'']

My green optics followed to where he motioned - and there the pretty girl was. standing - shock scared to move. I smiled and motioned her to come closer. She spoek to Vesperus with hurtful words and i found myself thowing him a dirty look. What exactly had he told her? It was a mystery to me. Kiki stirred and began to talk from my poll area. He told her th-" I growled and it hushed her. There were some things i didn't need to know. And having a 'mind reading' snake was somewhat annoying at times. I allowed my gaze to linger over the girl. As i did, Vesperus marched up to her - invading privacy and spat words into her face. One hark leant slightly back against my poll and i took the two neccessary steps forward to nip him firmly and pull back on his mane. "Enough now, Vesperus." My word was firm, and demanding. Sure i was supposed to be the 'bad guy' hell i was. But i wouldn't allow the fillies to be mistreated. We had to tred so carefully - what happened if they escaped? if they held bad thoughts against death valley then surely we would be hunted down.

When the colt spoke to me - i motioned him to my side. "We wait for the next word - Vesperus. Right now, i have nothing." Meaning of course that Kiki hadn't yet alerted me that there were any wandering fillies. So now we could lay silent - almost as if we were in hybernation until i got the next heads up. I turned to speak to avalon. My tones were powerful - they held so much, yet it came out in a smooth, velvet accent. "forgive me - avalon. Vesperus here does tend to get a little overpowering - doesn't he..." I paused and glanced over to the bright chestnut - giving him a quick nod and staring into his opticals with mine. surely he would understand the importance of making this filly feel safe and at home. Quickly, i turned back to the dun type mare and gave a sly smirk. "I'm methodone. There is one other - Fletcher, he'll be around somewhere. Welcome to your new home - death valley, in the south. Please make it easy and don't try to leave. You'll blow our cover.." I left my speech hanging - giving her an excuse to talk and pipe up the conversation as to why we would get our cover blown. Surely she had questions?

Character: Methodone
Status: complete
Word Count: 444
Comments: sorry it took so long - we had a big storm over in the UK -nods-

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[Nevaeh]

Avalon
Sweetie Pie

My greyish auds flicked back against my blackish blondish colored mane, as I half listen to what the bright flaxen chestnut brute was saying towards me. As he turned to face my body, at first I knew that I seemed like a soft little filly but on times I knew I could be a handful. My beautiful jet black orbs narrowed a little bit towards Vesperus, as I heard his laugh turned into a strange cackle, which in turn made me lift up my left front let and stamped it on the dry emerald grass. I turned by little greyish dunish colored body towards the brute I known as Vesperus, just as my darker greyish blackish colored lips opened, You think you’re a smart ass? Well if there is no heaven there would be not be a hell? Cause there would be no reason for hell to be here would there? shaking my little strange grey colored crown, I knew my mum was not as soft as she seemed and the trip that my mum Shabha had done to see her brothers and sister has made her even more stronger, I had only been there for a lot less time than my mum, but I knew I was a lot more braver then I use to be, as my dark colored banner flicked against my strange colored flanks, as I gave a little snort towards Vesperus.

Moving my little strange greyish body back a little bit away from both of the young brutes. I then turned to face the one who called himself Methodone. As my one of my black orbs and aud was on him while the others were listening a looking around at the land I had been taking to, as I began to look around while my auds still listened to what the darker grey young brute was saying towards me. To my black orbs the land did not look to bad even in the heat of the summer. I gave a little sigh when I heard what he said, but I quickly turned my crown around when Methodone said something to was very strange to me, Please make it easy and don't try to leave. You'll blow our cover. That is very strange indeed Avvy.

As I shifted my weight around so I got more comfortable again from standing, as my blackish greyish maw opened, How would I blow your cover if I escaped? Why shouldn’t I try? Or Do you think I will not try because I’m from the light side?

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Nevvy’s Notes:
Horse: Avalon
Muse: Good
Comments: Amira is Avalon’s half older sister. Shabha is both of there mum’s but different dads, and I did Amira’s post first.
Words: 426

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[Trill Stalker]

Vesperus
So You Think Your Worthy?

A quick pain brought me out of my red haze and then a painful tug of my short mane brought me back to myself. I swung my head around and stared at Methodone, half thankful for him stopping me from hurting the mare; which I had had full intentions of, and half regretting that he had. Torturing the little mare for a while could have helped me forget about the past, about my mother and the regrets for who sired me. Enough Now Vesperus Methodone demanded of me. See this was why he was the one in control. If it had been left to me then I'd have gone mad crazy on the bitch. I didn't say anything but I did back away from Avalon and the innocence that permeated off of her. My whole body slumped in disappointment as Methodone announced that he had nothing further for me to accomplish. Capturing Avalon dear had given me a chance to forget. Damn. Well I guess I could find something for myself to do... Thinking about it for a second I decided that doing that would not be a smart move. Methodone had allowed me to join his heard because he had thought that he could trust me. And though we didn't know each other all that well I was starting to like him. And I didn't want to jeopardize anything that he was planning. I'd just calmed down again when the filly spoke. Her words didn't really anger me it was more or less the fact that I was already on a short wick and very little would have stroked the flame to life. "We already are in hell you fucking idiot! This life..." I laughed as I said life, this beingness that I was going threw, experiencing was by no definition of a life. "That we are experiencing right now is hell, is torture. Death doesn't put us in heaven or hell. Death is sweet, there is nothing after it, just oblivion." How I wished to not be able to feel

I felt so coiled, like I was ready to explode at any second.I gnashed my teeth together to prevent myself from tacking a step closer to Avalon. My shear will had her still breathing. Methodone spoke from beside me, I didn't move, I simply breathed hard. "Yes, just a little overpowering at times my dear." Methodone could be so cute! My tail swung from side to side in jerky movements, almost hitting the dark rump of Methodone a few times. You'll blow our cover. Methodones words made me anxious, it was true if this little filly got away and started to reveal us then what ever plan Methodone wanted to push threw would become tattered and ruined. Avalon's light voice broke into my mind and I glared at her. "I dare you to try it sweety." I was ready brake her, to make her Neal down to me. "Just give me an excuse to sink my teeth into your hide!" I growled not hiding any of the hunger, the need that I felt for torture.

Word Count; 517 Sorry I lost muse.

[lynx'']

A low growl purred from my maw as the two bickered like children. How ironic, we were children, but we had to act like adults - think like them, that was who we were up against. "I said enough!" A loud rumble came from my mouth and i half reared, in my anger i slammed my hooves down onto a large rock. My temper was lost easily, it didn't happen often though, but i just snapped. Jotling my bulky frame back around to face the two with and angry glare in my eyes. "now isn't the time to argue." I hissed, clacking my teeth together. "You can do that when i'm not around." I added, nodding at Vesperus. but then the filly spoke to me and a sirk edged its way onto my jaw line. "It would blow our cover because as of yet - no one knows of our existance - no one knows where you are, you'll be pronounced dead, but really you wil lbe safe and happy. Here. Once the word gets out that fillies are going missing - they wil lbe on our tails. You will have everything you need here, theres no need to run off now, is there..." I spoke in almost seducing tones, my voice was that of silk, to catch her attention, though it wasn't proving easy with Vesperuss' short temper as he barked at the girl. "Vesperus. Why don't you go find the lady a place to stay, where we can keep an eye on her. " I winked at him, a polite way of telling him to go and calm down. He was in my good books, afterall he had brought back the filly to our layer. I chuckled, a low tone and looked at the mare. "How old are you?" Would she ask why? I could smell her scent easily in the fall wind. Would she produce us a foal this time 'round? I was sure vesperus would be pleased, if he were of age too - i still had no idea of his age, i didn't really know much about my gang member.

Character: Methodone
Status: complete
Word Count: 371
Comments: and again, some more crap for you. I'm really busy atm =/

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[Nevaeh]

Avalon

As my greyish colored auds half listened to what the young bright chestnut brute who I knew as Vesperus was saying towards me. When I had finished shaking my light colored crown, I felt a cold feeling coming across my little quarab body right down towards my dark colored banner. It felt as if someone had walked across my deathbed. Hearing the and seeing the young strange colored brute who I knew as Methodone, lyrics and him half rearing up made my skin give a little twitch.

Black orbs watched both of the young stallions to see what actions they were going to do, towards me. After hearing enough this time I kept my light greyish maw closed. While my mind began to race, as what to say towards the bright chestnut colt called Vesperus. Oh so know one knows about them. as my lighter colored maw opened, then my sweet lyrics came out.
There might be a need to rush of, my family. Who knows I might not be happy, you don’t control my feelings now do you?

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My auds flicked backwards so that they were almost pinned back against my crown for only a few second as I warning that just because I was a light, my black orbs held also little hint of warning to Vesperus. As I felt my fringe fall over my black orbs, while my darker banner flicked light against my flanks, as I shifted my weight around so I was back to being comfortable.

Hearing Methodone lyrics towards me, I turned my little pony body away from them, as I turned my crown back toward the greyish colored brute, as my maw opened, Now that’s just a bit rude to ask a lady her age. [/size] my long pink tounge came out and licked my maw lightly, as I paused to think about what he was asking me, after a little thinking time I hoped I had thought it right. If I have thought this right, lets say I’m just a year to young.

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Nevvy’s Notes
Horse: Avalon
Muse: hopeful
Comments: She isn’t two till Y8. An okay post I think
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