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[Patch]

All right, let's get this sorted out. I want to prove myself by battle. So all are challenged to take me on!

My Rules:

• No killing of either competitor.
  
• 3 attacks, 1 dodge.
  
• This is a fight for fun, ok? For the heck of it. So, there is no prize for the winner and no humiliation for the loser.
  
• The one to reply to this thread gets to do the first move.
  

Agreed? If so, then LET THE WAR BEGIN!

[Sohalia]

Thowra
Lock Up Your Daughters!



Take A Picture It Will Last Longer!

I just got back to the land of Midnight Acres. I left insearch of my father while I left my mother and my home behind. But I had no luck trying to find my father, Yarraman. So for the past year Ive been living in the shadows with the demons raising me, teaching me to live in the darkness, teaching me the ways of battle. I believe that I was coming along very while for only being a year and a half. But with being my young age I felt like I could take over the world, myself. But was this true, my goal was to be the most feared and hated brute in all the land of Midnight Acres. But I didn't live here, yet. I stilled lived with the demons in the shadows in a far away place and I would remind there till I reach two years old. I was here just to see did my father ever come back. But no, he never didn't and that meant the Marshes was mine when I turn two or so I hoped.

Since I was in the land anyway. I wanted to see did anyone wanted to start any trouble. I let my dark Grey carcass lurk in the shadows of the battle grounds while I was careful not to step into the sun rays, blowing my cover. I let my ice blue lanterns scans over the land while I notice a lonely soul as they looked like they was asking for some trouble. I let my nares flares while I took in the scent they gave out to the world around me. I could tell by his musky scent that it was a stallion. I let my ice blue lanterns stare him down from a distance. He seem to be much larger, wider and older that myself. But I knew that size wasn't everything, it was what you did with it what counted the most. So this russet stallion was asking for trouble lets see if I can help him out with it. I knew that I would be taking a risk with my move. But that was something I was willing to take. I always thought, if your living on the edge, your taking up to much room. But I believe I just jumped off the edge taking on this much larger stallion, but I couldn't help myself. I loved the feeling of pain shooting across my body and the taste of blood in my mouth.

I let my midnight limbs brings me around while I stood behind the brute while I was still a long distance away from him. I stalked like a lion in the dark shadows, beginning careful not to step on a small twig or dead leafs to get my cover blown. I let my ice blue lanterns scan the russet stallion over while I let them narrow in while my mind zone into the world of battle, blood and pain. I then began to let my slender midnight limbs carry my carcass at a full raging run towards the brute. My talons disappeared into the soft earth while I just gain more speed from the good grip it gave me. I closed the ground quickly upon the russet brute. I lifted my cerebrum high into the air while I darted towards him at break neck speed. I then tryed to ram the brute in his rear with all my might, never slowing down from my great speed. I hope that the brute would fall upon the earth face first, not knowing what hit him. I then quickly tryed to get away from his deadly hind limbs, hoping he would be to large to have time to kick out at my year and half carcass. After I was away I began to let out a chuckle towards him while I circle him like prey while I let my pink tongue roll out of my midnight mug as I licked my upper lip, wanting for his move.

[Patch]

Auds flicked. Was there someone else nearby? Hearing was whispering no, while Instinct screamed 'YES!' at me boldly, and it was difficult to control my mind's wanderings. Without warning, I suddenly felt something run into my behind forcefully. Russet carcass toppled forward, and I landed face-first on the ground, hearing at the same time a rib break. Neck rose, and two seconds later the rest of myself. My 18 hand frame was too heavy and slow in response to kick out immediately. However, the moment after, bay crown turned to see just who I was up against; and then beheld a yearling colt, black as night, licking his maw, eager for the fight. And I was as eager as he. True, my challenger was a little colt, but I respected him somewhat for not being afraid of my towering height.
As soon as I could turn, I stretched my neck down to try to take a piece of his side.

[Sohalia]

Thowra
Lock Up Your Daughters!



Take A Picture It Will Last Longer!

The summer heat was starting to get to my actions while I began to form a layer of sweat as it made me seem black as night as the summer sun still danced down as it bathed the earth and every living soul in it. I let my ice blue lanterns watch the large stallion while he done what I wanted him to do, fall on his face with force. I also notice that I was quick after my attack while I didn't get a quick blow from his brawny hind limbs. I still circle him while he came back upon his footing as he balanced his large carcass on all fours. I then notice the russet brute extending his large boa as his yellow fangs came out of hiding and started to come after my tender flesh. I tryed to quickly get away while I rear up, but that was a fools mistake on my part while I felt his fangs rip at my yearling chest. I gave out a battle scream while I felt the pain began to shoot through my carcass. I then looked down quickly while I could see the dark red blood began to dip off my chest and to the earth began. It seem like as soon as the red liquid hit the earth, it was gone from the lack of rain and the earth was drinking my blood, trying to find something to gain strength off of.

I landed back upon the earth only seconds later. I quickly reacted while I spinned my hind end around and kicked out with force at his neck. I then quickly moved away from the large brute while I began to start dancing around him in circles once more while I tryed to throw sand up into the air, making it more harder on his part. I could feel my sweat as the sand sticked to it like glue. It was then it began to dip off my bodice, just like my blood was still doing. I let out a slight snort while my nares widen, taking in my own scents that I gave. I was enjoying myself. I thought the demons have taught me well, but we will see how well soon, after this battle.

[Patch]

Sangria red orbs saw my challenger kick my neck with such force. I gasped; his sharp hoof had drawn blood. The red stuff ran down my body and dripped onto the ground. Colt kicked the burning sand. It flew through the air and stung my wound and eyes, sticking to places wet with my own blood. This battle was hard on my pride. How could a tiny kid fight a full-grown stallion so well?! Certainly, whoever taught him, taught him well.
The same crimson orbs of mine blinked off most of the silt as I looked for the next spot to attack him. A wicked grin crept across my features. Bay legs struck for my opponent's.

[Sohalia]

Thowra
Lock Up Your Daughters!



Take A Picture It Will Last Longer!

I looked through my long dark Grey forelocks as they fell over my ice blue lanterns. I let my lantern study the blood that began to form upon his russet boa. I let my pink tongue lurk out of my salty mouth as it rolled over my upper lip. I wanted the taste of his blood to melt over my taste buds. I then let my view change while I watched the sand that dance in the air for a few seconds. But with my lanterns wonder to somewhere else was another fools mistake on my part. But I was a yearling and learning from the every chance I got. I now learn, never ever let my ice lanterns off the one I'm fighting.

I could feel my breath disappear as if the russet steed stole it like a thief in the night. It hit me while I felt the pain shoot through my right side as my slender limbs began to buckle under me. His large talons hit my in my rib cage with force. I laid on the earth while I tryed to steal my breath back for myself. It took a few seconds, but I got my breath back. But the pain was steal there. I then let thoughts began to wonder thought my minds from my training. Never stay on the ground long. That means you are showing weakness. If you let the weakness take over you. You are at risk of giving your soul to the reaper and face death. Are you willing to do that Thowra. This was what my trainer told me. I now knew what he meant by this.

The pain settle in my ribcage while I quick rose from the earth. I let out a slight snort while I had to deal with the pain while my mind wonder back once again. If you think your man enough to fight. You should be man enough to take the pain. Thats what I had to do and thats what I was doing. I let my lanterns flash with danger while I stared him down, while I lusted for his blood. It was then I pushed forth while my yellow stain fangs began to show themselves from there hiding grounds while I tryed to take a bite out of his tender under belly, hoping maybe I could rip his soft tender flesh away. After my attack I tryed to move quickly away from the large brute to see if my attack was on target.

[Patch]

My heart twinged slightly. I was somewhat disappointed, having missed his legs, but altogether thankful that I hit him at all. Eying the brute strangely, I looked just in time to see him snap out at my tender stomach area. Reflexes shot in and I twisted my crown around, teeth bared annoyedly, which blocked the way to his move. I backed off a little.
The sun beat down on our heads and I could feel the sweat start to attract flies to my russet skin. Tail swished, scaring the flies away momentarily. Shining eyes were still fixed on my opponent. I couldn't help it. And there he was, a shining black knight as sweaty as I. His piercing blue lanterns stared back at me the same way I did. I dropped my gaze. Suddenly taking on an idea, but having a strange sort of presentiment that I would miss, rushed at my rival.


ooc: well i guess take your dodge and we're done!

[Sohalia]

Thowra
Lock Up Your Daughters!



Take A Picture It Will Last Longer!

This fight can be judge!

Sorry patch I didn't dodge, I get too caught up in my fights cause I like taking the hits. -shrugs- I forgot all about the dodge and thought I had another attack for some add reason. So thats a big mistake on my part because I should have been paying attention. But I can't make my dodge now cause there is now attacks left. But if the person judging the fight, since it states in the terms I must have a dodged and if I must have one. Could I dodge that last attack? If not since its already been rp, thats fine too.

-huggles patch- Good Luck

-points to everyone that reads thats laughing at me-
I keep telling you that im the slowest on one MA. I think this proves it. lmao

[lynx'']

yes - you can dodge the last attack dear.

[lynx'']

Skiba

attack and response one: an okay post - no spelling or grammar mistakes. Could of been a little longer and held some more detail.

attack and response two: where did your attack plan to land? Again, more detail is needed here for your opponent to give a good, reasonalbe reply. Well done with your spelling and grammar again though.

attack and response three: this post was better - you had a little information discribing his emotions.feelings and the surroundings - much better. (spelling and grammar fine once more)

Thowra[/u]

attack and response one: long- very nice post, very well written, lots of discription there. Mind your spellings - just a few errors there.

attack and response two: nice attack, very smart moves. Just watch though - your changing person every now andagain throughout your posts - making the spellings seem wrong.

attack and response three: spellings again! but a nice post - good use of voices etc. Well done, a good attack again - realistic.

skibas' damage[/u]

-twisted tendon in his left foreleg- if he walks too far, he risks the health of the entire leg. Faster gaits are a definate no. [heal in two seasons]
-infection in his neck from kick, turns nasty and causes muscle spasms [heal in one season]
-dodged.

thowras' damage[/b]

- infection in chest. makes it very hard to walk - attracts flies as we are in the middle of summer. [heals in one season]
- two broken ribs , cannot go faster than a trot without fear of puncturing lung. [heal in three seasons]
- dodged.

overall[/b]

a small, tidy fight, not much damage received on either side as the attacks were really small. Both of you think wisely about what would cause the most damage.

the winner is: TIE

it was really hard to judge as you both have good and bad points in your posts, i had to be realistic about it - could a coltreally win a fight over a fully grown stallion? And could a stallion really inflict so much pain onto a small colt that could easily dodge. i hope you both okay with the tie.


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[Sohalia]

im fine with a tie =] and you do have a good point lynx.

[Patch]

Interesting fight, Solly. it was fun rping with you. <3