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[Patch]

Please could someone tell me how to improve my posts? I am not an expert on rpg and sometimes I make Arian react strange or something. then it's embarrassing.

[nuzzer2]

Well I'm no expert in RP'ing myself but I have a few tips, just think of the situation in your head - put yourself in his place and think of how he would act, that's how I do it anyway.

Read the others post, use the things he or she informs you of (is it warm? cold? is the sun shining?) and include a little in your post.

And of course the classic: describe the nature around you, the way your coat looks in the light, the noises of the forest - ect ect.

[Sohalia]

Im not the best on rping either. Which I havent rp in a year till I found this rp so im alot rusty. I agree with druid. Since its Arian, he could talk to the mares thats his trying to claim. Have him try to get to know the mares and the ask them to come home with them.

[lynx'']

Yes. Think about splitting up your post into paragraphs, first, talk about the time of day, whats around you, then the weather, how it affects him and the surroundings etc.

Move onto speaking next, try to think how you would react if you were rudely spoken to ( "What are you doing here, fool") put yourself in your charries shoes, think of the emotions he/she is feeling, some days will be better than others. And of course, its always good to have a big histroy behind your character, if you get stuck, you can always refer back to his younger days.

Also, read other peoples posts, get some idea's off them, but don't copy them, try to be unique and have your own idea's.