( Ketamine VS. Noel ! )

[lynx'']

KETAMINE

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VS.

NOEL

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( FOR ELIXAR GROVE ! )

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So here we are, Noel. Me and you, fighting for the land you own. I'l lay down a few rules so none of us get fatal injuries, i'm a fair guy.

rules;;

• No one gets killed.
  
• Three attacks each, one dodge each.
  
• 200 word minium.
  

Does that sound about fair? Just speak up if they ain't to your liking. your up first.

Character: Ketamine
Status: complete (letter form)
Word Count: n/a
Comments: eep, i'm pooping myself doing this! plus...that totally sucks lol

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[Sohalia]

Noel
Follow Your Dreams!



Take A Picture! It Will Last Longer!

I moved into the land well known as its fights. Some to the death, some get hurt badly and some loose everything they worked hard for all there life. I was here to fight for everything that Ive worked hard for, my land, my family and my children. I don't want to picture what all that would become without me. Another baster stepping in to fill my shoes. I couldn't have that, not now and not never.

I pushed forth through the maze of large pine trees. It was spring time as the butterflies flew in the air. But the more I moved forth, the less I seen the sighs of joy. I now could see the skulls and bones of those who lost there life's before. I then thought of the last time I was here. I was in a death match with a name known as Jezebel. I had to say that doing death matches wasn't my type of thing. But I had to as I was once was a follower of the darkness stallion to all the land.

It was then I came to a halt. My copper lanterns could see the sliver brute standing before me in the distance. I releashed a slight snort. My temper began to raise, my blood began to boil. So there was the baster that wanted everything of mine. I moved forth, but this time in a thundering galloping. I closed the distance between us. I threw all my weight into my brawny chest as I hope to ram the brute with my thundering force. I hope to knot him hard upon the earth.

Word Count:279
Notes:Blah.... The only thing I could come up with on the starter post. lol I also agree to the terms.

[lynx'']

KETAMINE

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Slightly blurred vision focused hard on the sandy turf. I lowered my neck so my muzzle touched the ground and gave a loud snort; jolting my caranium back up and shaking my skull, hearing constant yapping in my brian, like a jack russel wanting to be walked. Silver based frame took a few steps forward and brow furrowed as i looked out into the distance for the bay stallion i was to be fighting. Still no sign. Again, a allowed a harsh breath to force down my nostrils as i spun quickly around to face the oppisite direction, looking out to the horizon in this direction just to double check he wasn't sneaking up on me. Frame gave a small twitch as the muscles rippled underneath, i was alert. Perhaps to much for my own good, for when a blackbird flew out from a nearby bush, i startled myself, tail flicked and kinked a little as i spooked away, nostrils quivering and green opticals set wide, whites almost showing. I settled soon enough, and returned to pecking at the ground, but keeping my pools on the look out. Inspecting the ground in such a way wasn't something that i did normally, however i found myself thinking about the filly, Alix as the time progressed. This was her father i was fighting, no? The king of Elixar Grove, where she had clearly stated she lived.

In an instant, the ground underfoot shook with a unmissable beat of a horse charging; crown shot up into the air and harks gently laid back into my poll, as not to be a target. Brow furrowed a little as i focused on his image, vision lburring now and again; this wasn't a good sign and i sidestepped nervously as he continued his charge, with no apparant statue of stopping. I lowered my skull a little and relaxed my body, waiting for the impact to come; eyes gently closed and i focused on my breathing, rapidly thinking up counter attacks. The blow wasn't far off; as his strong frame collided with mine i found myself being flung backwards, completely loosing my balance, i stumbled to the floor, winded. Opticals shot open and showed a little fear as i couldn't breath, i tried to cough and thankfully it worked. I sucked in a big gasp of air and staggered to my feet, a sharp pain residing in my right side of my chest, i took a wary but quick glance down ay my legs, grazed, the left knee bleeding, the other just scratched. I had been lucky there, i needed my pillars the most.

In a half-rear, i spun my frame around on my back legs so i was facing the unharmed bay; i gave one small paw at the cracked earth with my left hoof and lowered my skull, lunging forward into a charge. I kept my direction straight so i would hit him, unless he dodged and pushed forward, keeping my skull down as i attempted to collide with him; thrusting my head into his breast bone and clamping my jaw shut over his right knee. I retreated quickly though, to avoid being held in such a vunerable position. Cranium spun slightly as i wheel around to face the brute once more, ready for his attack. I chanced a look into his eyes, my bright green clashing with the feirce look he spat out. Why was he angry? I had been brought up to respect everyone, i had been told anger was the cowards way out, but was it?

Character: Ketamine
Status: complete
Word Count: 605
Comments: bleh, wake the hell up K =O

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[Sohalia]

Noel
Follow Your Dreams!



Take A Picture! It Will Last Longer!

My impact was right on target and I was glad to see it. Indeed I wasn't out to hurt the brute. I didn't even want him to have pain. But then again, hell who was I fooling? No one! I then notice how he fell upon the earth as he became unbalance from his weight. I let out a slight chuckle at the sound of his large bodice impacting with the earth. I then watched as he try to catch his breath. I wasn't going to run over to him and give him the first aid he needed. But then he tended to himself as he pumped the air to his lungs through a cough. But then he was up and really for his attack. I notice how a tiny stream of blood moved down his leg as the red tint stood out upon his sliver flesh.

But it was then Ketamine came charging at me. His cerebrum low toward the earth as he looked like a bulldozer trying to take me off my limbs this time. I gave out a slight snort as I looked at him head on, standing there, daring the brute to hit me. But then shortly after a few seconds he did. His cerebrum rammed into my chest. I then felt a sharp pain from my knee. I open my mug to give out a battle cry, but nothing came. I then slightly started to gasp for air. But then it came after a few seconds. My breathing came back, but I was breathing faster. I then slammed my left talon upon the soft sandy surface. Blood began to show itself form a cut his fangs left in my flesh.

I then moved forward toward him in a quick matter. I reared as I tower over him. It was then I tryed to make my attack on him. I tryed to land my left limb upon his back, my right limb upon his chest as I try to balance myself upon him, my weight pushing into him. My broa slightly acrh as my fangs try to dig into his withers. I then moved back quickly, so I couldn't make myself a target for his attack. I wanted to see my attack would work upon him. It was then I began to circle the brute waiting for his next attack.

Word Count:392
Notes:If you dont get the attack just pm me and ill explain it more to you dear.

[lynx'']

KETAMINE

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A sigh of relief ran over me as the bay brute let lose a shrill call, a clear sign that he was in pain; the metalic taste of his blood was almost sickening as it flooded into my mouth and down my throat, sticking to my gums and in between my teeth. I gave a loud snort and rolled my tongue to rid the taste. Apart from the sound of us two equines, nothing else could be heard, it was easy to pick up his breathing pattern, which had gotten reletivly faster, another good sign! My three year old frame lifted off the ground a few inches as i carriered around and kicked out, not meaning to touch him but as i inhaled, a sharp pain shot through the right hand side of my chest and i settled a little, being careful ont to make matters worse for myself.
Opticals grew wide when a blur of the bay figure could be seen coming at me once more, harks flattened a little and brow furrowed again, my jaw began that circular chewing motion and a gave a snort, trying to figure out what he was going to do. Before i knew it, he was there, almost on top of me, forelegs flaying in the air. With a loud squeal i rose onto my backlegs, almost copying his actions by thrashing my hooves close to him. I gave a small 'hop' on my hinds and fell to the left, out of the way of his hooves, a pretty smart, and quick dodge. I fell to the snady surface on all fours, lowering my head, audits lay upon my crown and my silver based frame had brought out in a heavy sweat, sides heaving. It had taken most of my energy to dodge his fatal attack and now i was paying the price.

A flock of crows flew from the nearby plantation of bushes and i startled, putting my cranium between my legs and bucking, hinds flying at the open air; crown rose once more and i looked sideways at the bay stallion, attempted to make some eye contact as he circled me. I kept up my trot, and kept my gazeon him, we were circling each other now. Smokey pillars extended further to gain me extra speed as i found the right moment for my attack. I broke eye contact and lunged my carcass forward, letting out a battle cry as i attmepted to latch my fangs onto his throat, purposely tangling my forelegs up with his. If my attack worked, it would proberly ristrict his breathing for some time, but as we were tangled together, he had the chance to take me down with him in a 'non-counted' attack. Would he chance it?

Character: Ketamine
Status: complete
Word Count: 474
Comments: it's okay, i understand it xD K has used his dodge now.

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[Sohalia]

Noel
Follow Your Dreams!



Take A Picture! It Will Last Longer!

I listen the the talons hitting upon the earth as I breathed in the dust that danced its way into the air. I then notice that my attack was close, but I failed at it. I let out a slight snort. I knew that I had just one more attack. I had some much riding on this, but right now, my mind was on this fight, this sliver brute. My copper lanterns widen as I notice him coming forth toward me. His yellow teeth coming deathly close to my soft tender throat. But he didn't make his goal. Moved quickly to the right, the only thing that I could felt was the air hitting my visage, then I could felt a soft touch upon my rear as his talon slightly scrape me. I then gave off a slight chuckle.

It was my turn, my hind end was now facing the brutes side. I then kicked out with all my force at the brute as I hoped to make contact with him, in his ribs. I hoped to crack a rib or two. I then quick worked my way to stand infront of the brute. I knew that there was one more attack coming from me. I let my copper lanterns watch him as I try to figure out what he had in mind next.

Word Count:223
Notes:I dodged his attack. I loved your last post! Sorry this one sucks I was in a hurry! Maybe I should slow down on the next battle. lol Good luck dear! -huggles-

[lynx'']

KETAMINE

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I gave an annoyed grunt as the bay dodged my attack, he was clever to avoid what could be a fatal injury. I remained at a steady trot, breathing in and out in great huffs; pelt breaking out in an even thicker sweat. Momentarily i closed my eyes, trying to calm myself down, concentrating on my breathing. A big mistake; a shrill cry left my blood stained maw as i felt pain shoot through my right hand side, he had kicked out and made feirce contact with my ribs. I stumbled, falling onto my fore-knees but then steadying myself so i didn't go down completly. I gave a sharp cough and rose back up onto all fours, shifting my weight and gasping as the pain increased. I had been a fool to avoid that last attack, i should of waited and avoided this one.

I put on a brave face, narrowing my optics and pushing air out of my nostrils. Ignoring the searing pain, i pounced froward into a steady lope, pushing myself up against the bay stallion, urging him to lope with me, all the time pushing into him. I felt our pilars clash against one another but still, i waited until the right time for my attack. It came soon enough as i used the final bit of my energy to push infront of him slightly, curling my silver based frame around him, trapping him. This is when i dug my hooves deep into the ground to come to a sliding stop, rearing and arching my neck to an uncomftable angle; i let out a final battle cry as i opened my jaw to reveal sharp, red tinted fangs and i tipped my body forward, hoping to rip at his poll. One of the most delicate parts of his body. Again, i stumbled with the pain he had caused me but managed to stay upright this time, hopping away from him and giving him one last look in the eye. My legs shook underneath me, threatening to give way at any moment, but it was up to the gods to decide who had won this mighty battle.

Character: Ketamine
Status: complete
Word Count: word count isn't working =O
Comments: JUDGE!!! good luck sohbear! <3 loved doing this =D

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Results

Noel vs. Ketamine

comments:
Not as good as either of your fights, I must admit. It was decent, though, and had okay details.[/center]

NOEL:

attack & damage received I:
Short, lacked a lot of detail, but I enjoyed Noel's thoughts. Nice attack, very realistic. No damage taken.

attack & damage received II:
Detailing was better. The response to Ketamine's attack was decently realistic, and his attack was the most realistic that I've seen.

attack & damage received III:
Nice dodge on Ketamine's attack. I loved his attack, since it would happen in real life. Lacked details.

overall:
Definitely not your best fight, but it was realistic enough.


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KETAMINE:

attack & damage received:
Great details to Ketamine's thoughts and the scenery around him. Attack was a bit strange, damage taken was also strange, considering how he was 'flung backwards,' and his knees were injured.

attack & damage received II:
Not as good as the prior post. The dodge was a smart move, and his attack was realistic. No damage taken.

attack & damage received III:
Response to Noel's attack was somewhat weak, but I enjoyed the amount of detail. Attack was well thought out.

overall:
Pretty nice, not much else. There were some un-realistic portions, but otherwise well-detailed.

Wounds & Scars:

Noel:
Like Ketamine, develops nasty infection in knees, lame for three seasons. Severe lacerations on his crest and poll, making him unable to rotate his neck and look around for a year.

Ketamine:
Develops infections in his left knee, becomings painfully lame for two and a half seasons. Broken ribs cause a slight lacerations to his lungs, thus causing his lungs to fill up with fluid - makes it difficult to breathe.

The Winner is:
Ketamine

The overall details in the post were easier to read, and I enjoyed reading your posts. Congratulations.

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[Sohalia]

CONGRATS LYNX! -huggles-

[lynx'']

*faints* holy shizzle nizzle =D thanks solly, really enojyed it!