Droja vs Trevor

[Sohalia]

Droja
Here Kitty Kitty Kitty!



Take A Picture! It Will Last Longer!

I let my slender limbs move my painted carcass into the battle grounds. It was here all the fighting took place. I had to say, this was one of the places I loved to be. I loved the feeling of the sharp pain, the blood shed and the screams. But it wasn't that right now that I thought about. My daughter had been here recent while she left behind her scent and her blood. But she wasn't the only one here in the herd. I also took in scents of Chaos and Blizzard. I took in a deep breath as I took in all the scents in the air.

I came halt in the wide open meadow. My copper lanterns scans my surroundings while I thought that this flat ground should do here for the battle. I wasn't going to call out for the damn fool to find me. He knew where I would be if he was smart enough to follow my scent. But there I stood, out in the open, waiting for him to come along and make his first move.


~three attacks
~one dodge
~If I win- I had the fun of scaring and wounding you.
~If You Win- You have the fun of scaring and wounding me.

[! CHOCOLATE BUNNY !]

The weather was unpleasant as I walked forward, Away from my last meal. I smiled as lightning streaked the sky above me. I was getting pumped up for my fight against a mare that just challenged me. I was ready for her attack, I was sure that it wouldn't be that much of an attack even though she's a tough mare. I looked around as I walked through the trees, Making my way to the meadow where the mare waited for me. I wouldn't give her the satisfaction of making a fool out of me, At least not yet. I looked up at the little bit of the sky that wasn't hidden by the trees. The sky was rumbling with thunder as I walked forward, Keeping my eyes glued to the sky. I could smell the blood in the air as I got closer to my destination, Closer to my fight. I could hear the faint sound of another equine's walk. I smiled as her painted frame came into sight as I glided, With grace, Towards her. I licked my bloodstained lips as I got closer to her, Wondering if I should try to kill her on my third and final attack. Maybe I would let her live to see another day. I will never know until that attack comes. I smiled at her, My bloodstained canines in front of my bloody lips. I picked up an easy canter as I started to circle her, Getting closer to her with each circle. I bucked the air twice, Getting the adrenaline in my body going. I could feel the adrenaline surging through my veins and I knew it was go time. I bared my teeth at her and I snarled at her, My snarl ripping through the air traveling towards her. I started thinking about my first attack. I could cripple her but that might end the fight for sure, If she chose to be a tough girl and stand through that cruel attack. Maybe I could try to kick her in the face and fracture her skull. I decided that I would try to kick her in the face or the side of her head near her ears so it would be more effective.


I stopped cantering around her and I went for her head on. I moved out of the way, Going to her left side. I stopped right next to her face, My rump facing her. I looked behind me at her and I grinned, A wide smirk on my face as I got ready to unleash my fierce attack. I let out a loud cackle as I bucked at her, Aiming to hit her right above her eyes. I reared up and let out a loud, Fierce battle cry. I shook my head and my white mane flew around my head. I cantered away from her and started to circle her again, Getting ready to take her first attack. I let out a strong cackle as I circled her, I sounded like the wicked witch of the west. I bucked the air as I circled her, The adrenaline rushing through my veins. I was ready to fight her, Ready to kill. Her scent was a sweet aroma as I circled her like a tiger or lion circling it's prey, Only she wasn't my prey but my opponent.

"Having fun yet, Bitch?" I asked her, Growling. I let out a loud cackle as I spoke to her. I tossed my head up and I reared as the lightning streaked and lit up the whole dark sky. I could tell that the weather was eager to see who would win this fight. The mare or me. This is going to be one good fight and I'm hoping that I will come out victorious.

Fierce Cannibal;; Trevor [Trev]
Deathly Words;; 651
Hit List;; Hope you like the post! Those terms are fine. Good luck, Soh.

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[Sohalia]

Droja
Here Kitty Kitty Kitty!



Look At Me!

There I stood in the middle of the golden meadow. Some might of thought that I was making myself a target for Trevor. But I had another thing in my mind. I didn't understand those who ran from there problems. But I wouldn't call this brute a problem, hell I made it. But this was me, I was a trouble making dark bitch. But it seem like I wasn't the only trouble maker out of Hollow Woods. There have been three members counting Chaos himself. So what would it hurt for the new queen to have her fun?

My eardrums heard the sound of the thunder rumble above my painted carcass. I couldn't help but to smile while I felt that the demons was fighting in the heaven's above me as they had there own little battle. But then my eardrums told me that something else was lurking in the shadows. My sentinels turned backward as the soul was coming up from behind me. Then it was his scent that hit my nose. I then knew that he was here as he began to circle me like a group of high school children really to fight. I could feel my painted bodice quiver with excitement as I knew this was it. I could felt my mouth began to water as I slightly foamed at the mouth. My taste buds wanting blood his blood. I wanted to hear his voice screaming like the little bitch he was.

Copper lanterns watches him while I lower my cerebrum toward the earth below like a wolf ready to pounce upon my prey. But then it was then he came to a halt at my right side. I then lifted my cerebrum high as I knew he was about to attack. He faced his painted hind end toward me as he looked at me and gave a evil grin. But it was to late, before I could move away. His hind limbs reached out as his talon caught me just above my right eye.

I don't remember falling upon the topography. But I looked up, the brute still circling me, but now I began the prey. I relaxed as I didn't want to jump right up from the earth. My air ways pumped the air into my lungs as a calm sense came over me. I tried to open my eye, but the only thing that I could see was red. It was the blood pouring from the wound and into my eye. I could feel it as it throbbed and it began grow bigger. But then I still laided upon the earth, the damn brute still circling me.

If thats how he wanted to play, so let it be. I let my copper lanterns watch him as he moved along. I thought of what I could do from the earth that I laid on. I then digged my hind talons into the earth as I quickly moved along my side towards him. My yellow stain fangs showed from there hiding place while I moved closer to him. It was then I open my mouth while I tryed to aim my fangs toward his front left hock. All my power went into my mouth as I hope that I might be able to cripple the weak bitch.

After my attack I then lift myself from the earth that I fell onto. The dirt and sand cover my right side that I fell on. I could feel the blood now running down my cheek as it made it ways toward the earth below me. I kept a close eye on the brute from my left one. I still wasn't able to see out of my right one. But there I stood waiting for his next attack, waiting to see what punch he can throw next.


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[! CHOCOLATE BUNNY !]

I circled her as my attack did it's damage. A fierce and loud cackle was released from my kissers as she collapsed, Falling to the hard, Cold ground. I could feel the adrenaline still in my body, It would be gone by the time I finished my final attack. I grinned at her when the blood from her wound started to flow. I went in to lick her blood, I wanted to taste her sweet smelling blood on my taste buds. I was soon stopped by her moving in towards me, Her yellow bloodstained teeth bared and aiming for my front left hock. I laughed at her poor attempt to try and cripple me. I broke into a trot and I smashed my front hoof down, Hoping to shatter her muzzle bone or break it. I laughed as I picked up a smooth gallop. I circled around her once then I went in to drink her blood. I dropped my head down to the pool of blood that was on the ground from the mares open wound. I grinned as her sweet smelling blood touched my taste buds. I lapped up the rest of the blood quickly as I got myself ready for her next attack. I laughed at her sand covered side. I could feel her blood pulsing through my body, Giving me strength. I glared at her and I snarled. I wanted to know what my attack would do to her painted porcelain silhouette. I moved around her, Galloping in circles. I grinned at her, The blood from her veins dripping from my bloodstained kissers. I extended my boa and I snapped my teeth at her, Teasing her with my bloodstained teeth. I snarled at her, Daring her to attack me again. A cackle boomed from my kissers, Fighting it's way through the air to hit her. I laughed at the vixen as the blood oozed out of her wound. I wasn't serene as all, More dynamic and forceful. I glided forward, Reducing my speed to a quick and easy canter. I could feel a drop of rain hit my painted silhouette. I looked up and the clouds opened up and their tears hit me in the face. The cloud's tears became a downpour, Soaking my painted silhouette.

"How did you like that one, Bitch? Pretty good for a bastard, Don't you think?" I asked her, Taunting her. I shook my crown, My tassels flying everywhere as I shook. I increased my pace, Speeding up into a fast gallop. My tassels and banner flew behind my silhouette as I galloped, My muscles rippling beneath my painted canvas. I let out a fierce battle cry as I tossed my head again. I inhaled and exhaled, My cage going up and down with my steady breathing. I looked at the vixen with my dark hazel orbs. I heard the thunder rumble, Shaking the sky. The dark sky was streaked with the lightning as it flashed, As if the heavens were battling, Dueling if you will. I grinned at the vixen, Stomping my talons into the soft ground. I reduced my speed again to a nice and collected trot, Picking my painted pillars up to my cage. I thought about the old fights I was in, Killing all my opponents. I remembered the fight with my cruel father the most, After all he was the easiest to take down. The hardest being the mare I use to love, Before I killed her. I could feel the downpour still hitting my silhouette, Ridding it of all the blood from the past battles. I shook my whole silhouette, Making all the water that was absorbed in my canvas fly away from my silhouette.

Fierce Cannibal;; Trevor [Trev]
Deathly Words;; 686
Hit List;; So much muse. I used many descriptive words so it might get confusing if you don't know what they mean. Anyway, Hope you like the post!
Direct Hit;; He countered her move by slowing his pace to a collected trot and then trying to step on her muzzle with all of his force, Trying to break her muzzle or shatter the bone.

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[Sohalia]

Droja
Here Kitty Kitty Kitty!



Look At Me!

So that fool missed my attack. What a damn shame. It was only my first attack and he had to miss it like a pump ass bitch. Hell he might have got me with a blow to my head. But I took it like a man more than he would ever thought of. I must say I was pissed off about him dodging my first attack. But I still had two more attacks that was left. Two more that would cause blood. I wasn't going to play the bitch fight anymore. I was here with a new goal in mind. That goal was to kill the brute. To me it seem liked a fair deal with him trying to give me deadly blows. So lets tangle baby.

I notice before I stood his large talon trying to smash my painted muzzle. Hell I couldn't have that now, not anymore. He just missed my muzzle just inches. But I was fast enough to stand up upon my limbs. I inhaled the dust that raised above the air as it made its way into my lungs. But his attack had failed, this time. I stood, my painted bodice tense and my sentinels lower into there graves. My right eye was still cover with blood. The dark red liquid was beginning to dry upon my flesh. But I could see out of it a little, but my vision was a blur from my right side. I closed my eye lid to keep my eye safe and cover.

Then it hit my taste buds. The salty taste of my own blood as it began to mix with the cream foam that form at the corner of my mouth. The once cream foam mixed with dark red liquid as it began to change into a light red tint. The salty taste of my own blood made my mouth water more. It was then I shifted my weight toward my hind limbs as I lunged forward toward the painted stallion. My yellow stain fangs then showed themselves as I moved forward toward him. I once more put all the power and force I could into my mouth as I quickly landed at his left side. I extended my boa as I reached toward his esophagus. My yellow fangs bared as I hope to clamp on it like a loin going in for the kill.

After my attack toward him. I arched my painted boa as I quickly moved away to see what effects my attack would have this time. I knew that he couldn't dodge both of my attacks and I hope that this one would put him in some pain. I hope that maybe some way I could rip his windpipe out him or even better, He could bleed out onto the cold earth under us. I let my copper lantern watch him closely as I came to a halt.


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[! CHOCOLATE BUNNY !]

I looked at Droja as she came at me, Her bloodstained fangs bared and closing in on my loin. I stood my ground, Ready for her attack. I moved forward a step, Making sure that she wouldn't do as much damage as she wanted to but she would still hit me. I felt her fangs sink into my loin, Causing as much pain as she intended to. I started to laugh at her attempt. It's going to take more than that to kill me. I stood there for a minute, Thinking about my next attack. I grinned at her and I took off at a fast gallop. I closed in on her, My painted canvas brushing against her right side as I took advantage of the wound above her eye. I turned my rump to her and I looked back at her, My face filled with excitement and adrenaline. I let out a loud battle cry as I bucked at her, Aiming for her cannon. I bucked with all of my strength, Hoping to shatter her cannon or even break it. I snorted in pleasure as I galloped away from her, To circle again. I bucked the air in excitement as I circled her. I let a loud cackle escape from my kissers. I tossed my crown as I galloped, Acting like a mad man.

"I hope you're in a lot of pain, I really do" I said to her, Cackling at her in a mocking voice. I went closer to her, Hoping to lick some of the blood from her face. I extended my boa, Sticking out my tongue to lick the blood. I felt the warm and salty liquid on my taste buds. I felt the blood from the wound on my loin start to ooze out and trickle down my back. I smiled as I arched my boa to lick my blood.


Fierce Cannibal;; Trevor [Trev]
Deathly Words;; 410
Hit List;; Alright so I'm not sure if it's possible to kick Droja in her cannon so if that's not possible then so be it. Hope you like the post. After Soh posts her last attack this battle can be judged!
Direct Hit;; He took her hit to his loin but it wasn't that effective since he moved a little so it wouldn't be as affective as she wanted to. He went to her right side and bucked at her, Aiming for her cannon trying to shatter the bone or break the bone.

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[Sohalia]

Droja
Here Kitty Kitty Kitty!



Look At Me!

I watched to see how my attack took effect on the painted steed. So he wasn't as tough as he thought. He just move a little bit to throw my attack off balance or just dodging them. What a pussy. But I did taste his salty blood that leaked into my mouth. The thick red liquid ran through my fangs and settle upon my taste buds. I let my lantern lid close while I seem to be in heaven with the taste in my mouth. But then he pulled away from me and started his next attack. I couldn't see the brute coming to my right. My vision was still a blur. But then I turn my cerebrum as my left lantern seen him and what he had in mind. He was going for my cannon bone was he now? I tryed it lift my leg quickly. But I wasn't quick enough. I felt the pain shot up my right limb. His target was off slightly due to me lifting my leg. I could feel the pain slightly lower that his target in my fetlock joint. I just hope that the annular ligament would withstand this hard blow. I knew that they was able to take large impacts. But would it be able to make it and protect my joint?

I filled my lungs up with cold air. Then I let it escape out in a loud snort. If he wanted to play the bucking game, let my show him how to play it. I quickly worked my way up to his rear. I then kicked out with my both powerful hind limbs. I was aiming for his balls. I was sure with the power and force behind my hind limbs. I'm sure it would be no problem reaching my goal. I didn't want this brute to have children, none never. Infact, I wanted to geld his ass. After my attack I moved back to see what damage I would cause to him. I hope that it would be good.

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Results

Droja vs. Trevor

comments:
this was an awesome fight to read and judge. It possessed both realism and detail, and it was hard to choose a winner.[/center]

DROJA:

attack & damage received I:
Very good detail. I enjoyed the post because you didn’t play “Superman,” and she received actual damage. Realistic attack. Minor grammar mistakes.

attack & damage received II:
Quite realistic. I liked her attack, and the detail was nice to read. No damage taken.

attack & damage received III:
Nice reaction to the attack. Less realistic than usual, but very nice to read. It was short and to the point. Loved the attack.

overall:
Very nice! You kept a certain amount of realism in the post, which made it into an actual squabble, rather than a huge war.



xx

TREVOR:

attack & damage received:
Great detail in the post. I loved how you described the scene and how I knew what Trevor was thinking. The attack was very well thought out, and was quite realistic. No damage.

attack & damage received II:
Good counter. Attack wasn’t very realistic, as it would be hard to step on one’s muzzle without rearing, but it was still very well thought out. No damage taken.

attack & damage received III:
Not as well liked as your other posts. Trevor played a sort of ‘invincible’ role, that the attack didn’t at all harm him, and it’s not very enjoyable to read. Otherwise nice.

overall:
Very good. There were moments when Trevor seemed like nothing could hurt him, which took away from the realism, but it was rich in quality.

Wounds & Scars:

Droja:
Severe laceration above eye. The skin begins to swell, blocking Droja’s blood flow to her right eye. Eye eventually rots away. Minor abrasions to her back and haunches. Deep flexor tendon has been knicked, although no skin is broken. Lame on that leg.

Trevor:
Lacerated loin, bleeds out severely for a few days, but heals within a season. Minor trauma to hind legs; affects ability to breed, and Trevor is lame on his hind end for two seasons.

The Winner is:
Droja

It would have been in Trevor’s favor if not for the ‘invincible’ nature that he was portraying when taking damage. Very, very close fight. Congratulations.

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[! CHOCOLATE BUNNY !]

Congratulations Soh!

Thank you for judging the fight, Azzy! I will work on my attacks, Trying to make them more realistic and I will also make sure not to make my characters invincible. That was a very close fight indeed.

[Sohalia]

Thanks Palo

It was a very close fight. You kept me on my toes during the fight and I believed that you was going to win. You also done some great detail in your post. Cant wait till the next one