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Post by lynx'' on Mar 3, 2009 10:17:08 GMT -5
BLIZZARD
[/font] Russian roulette is not the same without a gun And baby when it's love, if its not rough it isn't fun STEP up c'mon you little runts. I challenge any who is foolish enough to fall into my dirty ways of fighting. Lets lay down the rulebook. Shall we; darlings?- Only equines up to the age of one and a half.
- Three attacks each. NO dodging. Dodging is for fillies.
- 300 word minium.
- If I win: I get the pleasure of scarring you.
- If you win: You get the pleasure of scarring me and I leave your pretty 'lil ass alone.
- Defender (whoever replies) posts first.
Are we agreed sweetcheeks? Lets do this. Character: Blizzard Status: complete (letter form) Word Count: n/a Comments: tehe, i just want her to start fighting and have a record from an early age. [/size][/color][/blockquote]
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Post by Sohalia on Mar 3, 2009 12:19:13 GMT -5
[Agreed to the Terms] [Yes dodging is for the little fillys] [They don't know how we roll in HW]
Anna Lee
I moved out of Hollow Woods as this was my first time out of the hell hole. Indeed I need to get away more and to see the big world out there and meet new dark souls like my own. But I wasn't sure where I would be heading for my first outting. But then I knew where I would be heading. The battle call from another filly hit my tiny eardrums as I moved along. I moved off the dirt worn path that Ive been following and into the dark forest I went.
Copper lanterns scans ahead of me to see who was making the battle call. Talons carried my painted carcass over the land without a sound. Sentinels flickers as they rotated upon my skull. I then seen my target, damn the fool that called for battle. I let copper lanterns scans over her flesh as she stood with her rear toward me. I then knew who it was, it was Blizzard. I let out a slight smirk while I knew that this shall be fun, both filly's, same blood lines, same herd. Who could ask for a better match?
I stalked forward like a loin through the maze of pines that called this place home. My painted cerebrum hanged low toward the earth while I let the thoughts of my first battle ran through me mind. I now had sneaked up behind the filly, but I wasn't sure if she knew I was there or was she just playing with my mind. I knew mostly she was playing with my mind, letting me get as close as I could get toward her light chestnut carcass.
It was time for me to do this, time to make me move. I hope to make mother and father proud of there little girl. But before I knew it, I stepped upon a twig and blew my cover. I had to do something and quick. I lunged forward like a rabid wolf, yellow stain fangs showed from there hiding spot, foam form upon my painted chest and the corner of my mouth. I was in midflight as I tryed to land upon her light chestnut back, fangs tryed to latch on to her boa. I hope for the taste of blood on my taste buds, her small frame to fall upon the earth. But I would have to wait to see what happens. If my moved would work I would be riding her like a human riding a horse.
Word Count:418
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Post by lynx'' on Mar 3, 2009 12:53:58 GMT -5
BLIZZARD
[/font] Russian roulette is not the same without a gun And baby when it's love, if its not rough it isn't fun It seemed I had screamed my battle call loud enough for some to hear it, for it wasn't long before the wretched scent of my own neice came to my flared nostrils. I let out a 'witch' like cackle and moved on from my resting point, down on to the battlefield to meet my maker. The painted filly must of thought she had it easy, right? Audits tipped back, surely she had noticed that? I had heard her, the foolish bitch had snapped a twig and just as i turned around, she attacked. The scent of blood was the first thing that flooded through my open nares, after that, came the feel of her fangs sinking into my upper neck. Slapping my audits back, as not to make them a target of attack, i acted fast, my back barely holding her weight as it was not fully grown. I reared, it took stength to get up to full height with extra weight on my back, but i managed it. Up i went, soaring to full weight whilst the skewbald filly clung to my back, dainty forelegs flarred out, thrashing the air three times, before i added an extra 'bounce' ad allowed myself to fall backwards. If my move was to work, i'd land on her, hard. Hopefully it would cause some damage. Giving a short snort as i hit the ground, i took in a gasp for air, the impact almost winding me. Luckily, i kept straight, and pounced up quickly, dust covered my light chestnut pelt, making me turn a sandy colour, again, i reared to half-height and smirked, kicking out but purposely not letting my hooves anywhere near the filly. I spun 180 degree's and bolted into a fast gallop, i knew i was fast, arabians where known to be fast, but would she catch up with me to perform her next attack? I god damn hoped so. Character: Blizzard Status: complete Word Count: 318 Comments: haha i LOVE the attacks, solly. Hope you understand what Blizzard did. *dances* [/size][/color][/blockquote]
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Post by Sohalia on Mar 3, 2009 16:39:08 GMT -5
Anna Lee
My yellow stain fangs had reach there goal as I tasted the red blood upon my tiny taste buds. So this was how it tasted. The salty taste left me wanting more of it. So this is the taste that my mother and father learn to love. I knew that I already loved the taste of it. I knew I would grow up to become one blood hungry bitch just by this little match.
My attack was good as I landed upon her spine, my fangs went into her chestnut flesh. But she acted quick as well, maybe to quick. She then lifted upon her hinds as she put all her power and strength into it. But there wasn't nowhere for me to go, so I held on and braced myself for the impact with the hard earth under me. I let my eye lids cover my lanterns as I held in my breath and relaxed my bodice to make the impact less painless. Then it happen I hit the hard earth. The chestnut filly had fallen on top of me hard. I watched as she had gotten up. My painted limbs lifted my bodice off from the earth as I let out slight grunt, pain shot through my right side, but no blood was seen.
I let my copper lanterns watch how Blizzard from a smirk upon her mug as she bolted off into a fast gallop. I then began to think to myself. Look that little bitch is running from me. What a pussy! But I knew to myself this was a game of hers. She wanted to play that way so be it. I tossed my painted skull into the air while I began to chase after her. Pain shot down my right side, but I just pushed on. My Quarter Horse and Arabian blood made a good mix inside of me. I had the stocky bodice of a Quarter Horse, but was fast like a Arabian.
It took me a few seconds to catch up with her. I move to her side as we began to ran side by side. I trained myself to her pace as then I let my own smirk form upon my mug. I knew for me that this was going to hurt like hell on my own part. But pain was something I loved. I wanted for the right moment as then I tryed to dart under her at a full gallop. I was trying to use my painted frame for her to trip over. I hope that this attack out send her tumbling in circles over the hard earth.
I then moved out of the way watching to see what will happen, wondering would my attack work. I stood still my cerebrum lower toward the earth in a threating way. I wasn't going to run, I was going to stand there and watch her plan her attack, along with her actions. I let another smirk form upon my mug while I waited for her actions.
Word Count:502 OOC: Yep I understood it. I hope you understand this one.
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Post by lynx'' on Mar 4, 2009 9:35:37 GMT -5
BLIZZARD
[/font] Russian roulette is not the same without a gun And baby when it's love, if its not rough it isn't fun A small trickle of crimson could be felt running from my crest, down my neck. I shook my dipped skull, sending small droplets of the thick liquid dashing to the floor, staining the dry earth i stood on. My attack had worked perfectly, hopefully, she would have some spinal injuries once we finished. It wasn't long before i felt her warmth against me, she had matched my pace perfectly. I dipped my cranium, tossing it high into the air in a small 'jump' where my legs lifted a few inches off the ground. We ran for some time, but never did i look straight at her; i didn't want to know her attack; i wanted her to take me by suprise. A sharp pain shot up my left foreleg as she dipped underneath me. In a frantic movement, i attempted to shorten my stride so she didn't catch all four of my dainty pillars, but to no avail. I was sent tumbling to the ground; tucking in mycrown as the ground came closer, as not to break my neck; i embraced my small body for the impact. And it came, soon enough. A loud 'umpf' came from my parted kissers as i rolled over and landed on my right side, sliding for a few metres before ieventually came to a stop. And there she was, waiting for me, stood infront. Quickly, i regathered my legs and jumped up, a sharp pain came from my chest on the right hand side. But it couldn't of been a fatal injury, afterall, i was still standing. Mocha coloured opticals shone with a tint of danger as I glared down at the filly; nostrils held wide, drawing in the dusty air that surrounded me, pelt covered in a speckly sweat from the short gallop, sides heaving in, and then slowly out. I stepped forward, all the time, my pools locked on her copper lanterns, trying to judge my attack, which would pain her most, show blood and perhaps cause her trouble in the long run. With a loud snort; i rocked up onto my hind's; forelegs tucked into my belly tightly; neck arched and audits pressed gently back into my skull. The whites of my eyes shone as bright as the day, showing my anger; anger? Was it really that? Perhaps it was pleasure. I wasn't so sure. A loud snort forced down my nostrils as i returned to the sanded ground and i lunged my carcass forward, neck now extended as i pounced towards her, skidding with my forlegs as to tuck my frame in tight; my jaw opened wide and ivories reached out to clamp onto her throat, with my slide i would barge into her, knocking her off balance maybe? All i knew was that my taste buds tingled with the pleasure of tasting blood. I tucked in my neck and danced sideways, to watch the impact of my clever attack. Creating a whirlwind of sand and dust particles. Character: Blizzard Status: complete Word Count: 494 Comments: Yes, easy enough to understand xD Basically, Blizzard charged at her, and once she hit Anna; she extended her neck to rip at her throat ^.^ enjoy. [/size][/color][/blockquote]
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Post by Sohalia on Mar 4, 2009 12:12:55 GMT -5
Anna Lee
I let my copper lanterns watch Blizzard as she began to tumble down toward the earth. I couldn't help but to give out a slight chuckle as I watched her being tossed like a rag doll by gravity. I looked for any signs of weakness as she got up, but she didn't show a spot really, but I could tell that she landed hard on her right side, I knew that I would need to remember her weakness for my next attack.
I then notice her charging toward me, her white lanterns stared at me as I could see the danger that lurked behind them, the demons dancing in her wicked black heart. She must had her attack already plan as she ran toward me in attack mood. I notice her fangs come out of there hiding spot and go toward me throat, but it was too late on my part. I felt her fangs rip my painted flesh away from my throat. Her small frame impacted with mine. But my stocky frame kept me from hitting the earth as I just stumble back a few steps. It was then my first drops of blood leaked out from my flesh. I could feel the tiny scream of thick red liquid down my neck, to my chest and then down my front right limb. My lungs began to pump faster with air as if to test to make sure my wind pipe was still working it was, but I knew I was going to loose alot of blood from this one wound.
I tossed my cerebrum while little drops of blood was sent dancing around near the timbers as they flew through the air. I was now pissed as the pain got worse in this past few seconds. So that bitch wanted to play like that. Ill give her something to play with. I watched as she danced away from me as she threw dirt and sand into the air. I lunged forward through the flying dust and sand, copper lanterns looked her my next attack, right side, I thought to myself. I tryed to move quickly over to her right side as I tryed to slam it with all my weight, cerebrum held low toward the earth as I try to bite harshly at her right front hock. I hope that I could hurt her side worst and maybe damage her small hock in the progress.
I then moved away from her, blood still leaking out of my throat, but little did I care. I let out a slight smirk toward her while I tossed me cerebrum once more. But there I stood, prancing in place waiting for her next attack. I then arched my boa as I try to protect my throat and not make it another target.
Word Count:471
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Post by lynx'' on Mar 4, 2009 12:58:37 GMT -5
BLIZZARD
[/font] Russian roulette is not the same without a gun And baby when it's love, if its not rough it isn't fun Tasting that sweet red liquid made my frame shudder slightly and i too, gave out an amused cackle, though it was hardly reconisable, as now, the weather had worsened; raindrops had begun to fall onto my delicate skin; bathing me in a coat of damp. I gave a quick glance to the darkening sky; there was storm brewing, and it would soon be upon us. It was a good job the battle would be coming to an end with my next, and final attack. It was one thing that two nine month old fillies were out alone and fighting on the battlegrounds; but being caught in a rough winter storm was just god damn stupid. As i had sidestepped away from her; my right side was visable; from the outside it didn't look too bad, just grazed and slightly swollen, but i knew that inside, the damage could be much worse. She acted quickly, and her attack was smart, attack the ready wounded. Bitch. Her weight swung my small frame to the left, somehow, i stayed upright, my spindly, yet somewhat strong pillars were parted to give me balance. I wasn't expecting her neck to arch, and lunge at my knee joint so fast; her fangs latched around the 'ball' and the noise of grinding bones made me hop up, bringing my legs in tight to my body. I didn't glance down at my hock to see if she had drawn blood; my gaze was fixed on her, never moving. That was it; fight over; of course, i knew i would have to improve if i were to take on bigger challenges. In further battles, more blood would be shed, bigger, and better attacks would have to be learn if i were to survive the harsh world of being a warrior. A firm smirk spread upon my features as i imagined my dearest big brother's face when the two of us arrived back at Hollow Woods scared and wounded, covered in eachothers blood. The thought only made me laugh. Character: Blizzard Status: complete Word Count: 337 Comments: not my best =[ let myself down here. Azzy, you may judge now dear. Good luck solbear <3 [/size][/color][/blockquote]
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Post by Sohalia on Mar 4, 2009 13:14:36 GMT -5
Good Luck to you to lynxie. I believe that them nut case filly's made Hollow Woods proud. It was also fun fighting with you.
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Post by azul. on Mar 4, 2009 14:50:38 GMT -5
results blizzard x anna lee for FUN.
overall - very nice fight, hard to judge..
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BLIZZARD. attack & response one - minor grammar errors, better than the previous fights. very smart attack. nice. attack & response two - grammar wasn't as good, mis-used words, but i loved the details that you put into it. attack & response three - very nice use of the weather, otherwise short and not much body. still good.
ANNA LEE. attack one - very nice. lots of grammar mistakes, but very, very good. attack & response two - love the response to the attack. very realistic, great details. attack & response three - response was very easy to understand, i enjoyed it.
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wounds & scars BLIZZARD; 1; gouged crest (uncomfortable for 2 seasons). 2; left shoulder skinned (forms infection and shoulder is in constant pain for 1 year.) 3; chipped knee (heals itself in 1 year, but makes it impossible to run without falling & the possiblility of breaking leg.) ANNA LEE; 1; right back scraped (nerves damaged, right legs are numb for 1 full year.) 2; punctured neck (severe blood loss, difficulty breathing, often too tired to move.)
winner tie - both fillies had equal attacks, and the roleplayers both had equal grammar issues.
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