>>savvy ♥
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Post by >>savvy ♥ on May 2, 2009 14:12:24 GMT -5
NAMI You never seem so tense, love Never seen you fall so hard Do you know where you are? Truth be told I miss you Truth be told I'm lying When you see my face I hope it gives you hell, I hope it gives you hell When you walk my way I hope it gives you hell
[/b][/center] I had found my way into the clever little kingdom rather easily. The mountains had proven to be quite the trouble, keeping me away from most of the place, but this crazy bitch had done it. Where they supposed to be a barrier that kept many out? If they were those rocky peaks were not doing to good of a job, but then again, I was intelligent, capable of caring for my own ass, and solving those twisted puzzles everyone seemed to put out for me. The lands I found myself crossing were covered in the veil of night; the sky was black and even the glow of the moon wasn't enough for me to see clearly. I was in danger, I could feel it in my bones, yet I was ready for whatever dared to come my way. Predators? Bring it on, baby. Fearsome dark stallion's with one thing on their mind? Fuck them. Seriously; they'd like that. They, no matter how much they would like it, were not what I was looking for. I was seeking out my new king in this twisted maze. In truth I found it rather fun to dash about this place, weave between the trees, jump the rotting logs, and evade the roots that stuck up awkwardly from the ground ready to trip me and send me to my knees. This place was just one big challenge, and I, of course, was always up for any kind of challenge. My fairly well-sized feminine bulk slid to the easiest of halts and I felt my mane and tail whip about my bay-roan form crazily. Teeth gritted together in concentration, eyes narrowed and muscles tensed. "Oh, my dear king; come out, come out, wherever you are. You can't hide from me." I called out smooth from behind a large tree, listening as my slippery velvet vocals echoed back to the cupped ears that I quickly brought forward. A bored look began to crawl it's way over my face and jaws parted loose into a yawn. I sure hoped that this son of a bitch was actually as entertaining as I had heard him to be upon moments of arriving in this hell-hole. My right foreleg lifted and my bodice loosened in preparation of a smooth walk, but now, I paused, listening closer. Nothing. That was just me; excited, on edge, not knowing what to expect when I actually met the Intrepid fellow. Names were dropped frequently, things were said, and rumors were started. I never believed any of that shit until I saw it with my own two eyes. Nostrils flared angrily; I was irritated. What kind of a gentleman was he to keep a fine prize like me waiting? Right, because I so wanted a gentleman on my hooves. Eyes rolled a quick rotation in their sockets and my easy trot was picked up. Smooth, powerful, graceful, and seductive. If only there was a king to gaze upon me.[/blockquote]
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Post by lynx'' on May 2, 2009 15:11:30 GMT -5
I lingered in the shadows, not seen by anyone - anything. my silver frame stood out wildly from the golden leaves, but dispite the many dead ones on the floor , i glanced up and found that the sun could still not quite reach the depths of the forest. I wasn't complaining, i'd lived here for five years now, i was here when i was just born, with my twin sister. I stopped the thoughts there, she was dead, along with my mother and younger sister, dead and gone and never to be seen again. An angry grunt escaped my maw as the painful memories of my blessed childhood with my family rose from the depths. In my anger, i half-reared, slamming my hooves down into a rotting log which crumbled under my powerful weight. I let a high pitched hiss roll off my tongue as a grey squirrel leapt squealing from the rotting trunk. I lunged forward- my teeth missing the animal by centimetres. In my temper, i wasn't aware of the time of day and before i knew it - it was nightfall and the moon shone brightly into the forest, casting silver rays throughout the semi-cleared area i stood in. I was soon distracted by a shrill voice coming from the north part of the land. It was the newcomer. Nami and i scowled - picking up an easy trot to go and seek her company. I needed to talk with her, ask her quesitons, i was very curious and wanted to know what she was like. Her bay roan frame soon came into veiw and i slowed to a walk and gritted my jaw, coming to a halt one metre away from her. "Well well well it seems the wench can obay orders..." I laughed a lwoly cackle and stared at her with black eyes. I looked almost like a ghost in the moonlight. "Nami....i need questions answered..." I added, winking at her once - not something i normally did.
Character: Intrepid Status: complete. Word Count: 340 Comments: bleh sorry =/ kinder emotional so i couldn't write more =(
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>>savvy ♥
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Post by >>savvy ♥ on May 3, 2009 8:24:42 GMT -5
NAMI I like that boom boom pow Them chicks are jackin' my style They try to copy my swagger I'm on that next shit now I'm so three-thousand eight You're so two-thousand and late I got that boom boom boom That future boom boom boom I heard him before I smelled him. The soft padding of hooves on dirt, the sudden explosion of noise as he broke into a log, and the hisses that rolled from his tongue. It could be none other that Intrepid himself. I waited, for a moment, as he came up behind me and stood so close; a simple meter separating us. Was that as close as he dared to get? It seemed that he had already forgotten the type of mare I confessed myself to be. Slowly I digested his words, one cupped ear tilted forward to listen to what was ahead of me and the other directed at him. Smirking slightly I lifted a foreleg and began to spin around towards him, a perfect pirouette, pistons working the ground delicately. "My king," I began, speaking in slowly at first, head held up to match the height of his. Yes, I did feel dominant just then, and my gaze was set firm on his ghostly form to measure his reaction. "You'd be surprised at the things I know how to do. In the most suggestive way possible; of course." My right eye snapped closed in a wink that matched his own, a clever grin crawling across my chiseled features.
Head tilted slightly as I watched him, taking in the form that was suddenly becoming so familiar to me. If I were to ever claw my way to the top I had to get to know my king as well, correct? Paper-thin nares flared wildly and I took in the overwhelming masculine scent Intrepid gave to me. Breathing out contentedly, my tail lashed my own sides with the stride that took me daringly closer to him. "Fire away, babe, I have answers." Smooth seduction flowing from my mouth, breath coming is short gasps. Did I think I could seduce a king? I was confident in my abilities, I was unbeatable, unstoppable, but as I stood there looking at the powerful king in front of me I had to admit to myself that I was not invincible. I knew the risk I was taking, yet he had to appreciate a daring mare, didn't he?
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Post by lynx'' on May 4, 2009 13:08:47 GMT -5
The corner of my jaw twitched up into a sly smirk as she spoke; her flowing tones swirling around my ears as i took in her words. My eyes held a hard stare in her direction. Looking at her bay roan frame with curiousity. As she stepped forward - i suddenly became intimetly aware of her, my coat was hot - even for the time of day - soon the sun would set and cast a shadow throughout the lands. My nostrils flared, taking in her scent and my breathing deepened when she spoke her final words. I still held a small smirk on my jaw line, but it was a few minutes before i spoke. I stood silent glaring into her eyes, trying to find out her secrets, attmepting to add tension. "How did you find Hollow Woods?" My question was simple and one i asked every new equine that ventured here to call home. After that - i fell silent taking one more step closer to her, my breathing increasing a little, my eyes dropped from her face to gaze upon her body as i waited for her lyrics to pierce my ears.
Character: Intrepid Status: complete. Word Count: 209 Comments: ha, i have an excuse for having crap posts! -hungover-
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>>savvy ♥
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Post by >>savvy ♥ on May 5, 2009 9:05:27 GMT -5
NAMI I like that boom boom pow Them chicks are jackin' my style They try to copy my swagger I'm on that next shit now I'm so three-thousand eight You're so two-thousand and late I got that boom boom boom That future boom boom boom I looked at him for a moment, tail lashing behind my toned quarters, and I managed to hold back the urge to approach him. Intrepid was proving to be good at building suspense, and I smirked slightly at the brute. I could feel the heat of his body pulsing off towards me, and I longed to touch him and feel it burn and melt me so I was a helpless puddle at his hooves begging for mercy. Being in control was always nice, but there was never anything like being controlled in that manner. He stood still as possible, staring into my orbs, grabbing, searching, and clawing to find some emotion. “Give it up, you won’t find anything in my eyes, anything of use anyways.” tilting my head slightly I continued to stare back blankly totally unfazed by his presence.
Cupped audits flicked forward and I digested his next words, and I was sent wheeling. “How did I find this place?” I repeated his words, jaw set firm, and I worked my bottom lip between my sharp teeth careful not to draw blood. “I’m sure I don’t have to tell you that I’m too independent for these fucking herds unless I’m in control. Silly me got here to late,” pausing I flicked my gaze back up to meet his, testing his reaction. “I found this place while I was on another one of my wonderful adventures. I can’t explain it but I was drawn to Hallow Woods; lucky you.” I hissed the last two words, a clever daring grin splitting my features when he shuffled a step forward, and my dainty more feminine head hovered inches from his masculine chiseled one. Breathing out sharp from my paper-thin nares my warm breath spread itself over his cheek, and I took a step forward that closed the last few inches between us. My chest pressed against his muscular broad one, neck craned forward, and with my teeth bared I drew my muzzle up his next careful to hopefully cause pain but not yet break skin.
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