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[Sohalia]

Arian

I moved into the land. I was weak and tired. I had given up. I had done wrong and messed things all up in my life. I should have been there for my family, my queen and my daughter. But I wasn't. I just left them alone. I couldn't stand myself. Then when I was gone I was attacked by the wolves that Rene warned me about. I was wound and couldn't go on no more.

I laid my sliver bodice upon the mucky earth. My breaths began to get weaker while lessed air filled my lungs. But I couldn't died with out Rene knowing. I waited her to know. I waited to tell her some things. But then again I didn't want to break her heart. But this was the only way to do it. I lifted my cerebrum out of the mucky earth while I open my mug. I called out to her as loud as I could, hoping that she would hear my call for her. Just her not little Kalo. I didn't want her to see me like this. I then rested my cerebrum back into the muck while I waited for her.

[Nevaeh]

Renegade

As I was watching over my land waiting for the Stupid mutts to come back into her terra. Beautiful chestnut auds pricked forward hearing a faint call, but a noticeable one.
Turning my beautiful chestnut and white pinto body towards where the faint call was coming from. My muscles twitched underneath my painted skin, as my white pillars made me travel all the way to where his call was coming from. As my light tanned hooves hit the ground, which reminded me of my time I spent with my farther in Hollow Woods. Beautiful dark chocolate brown and ice blue orbs then I spotted my lord not far away from me.
Trotting further towards him, I lowered my crown down towards him, then nudge him lovingly.

I knew that my lord was very weak, and then opening my light pale pink maw, What’s Happened my love? shaking my crown a little, I could see wolf bites, and my eyes told the story even if my vocals did not.

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[Sohalia]

Arian

I heard the sounds of her talons hitting upon the earth. Then I heard the soundwaves that she spoke toward me. I knew that she knew what happen. I began to speak towards her, my voice was weak, but yet loving towards her. I love you Rene. I wont be able to protect you. Please forgive me. I never been good to you and little kalo. I should have been there more. Please do me a favor and find true love. I let my lids open while my copper lanterns looks into hers. I was going quick and I knew soon I would pass on. I spoke again. If your every in trouble just call out. I know someone that will come and protect you. His name is Noel. The only thing I waited for was her words. Her sweet tones toward me to see did she understand what was going on.

[Nevaeh]

Renegade

Chestnut auds where pricked forward listening to what the grey arabian stallion in front of my beautiful brown and ice blue orbs where watching him. I the lowered my crown and gently and lovingly nudge his side gently. Opening my pale pink maw, I can’t forgive you cause you have done nothing wrong.. I love you as well, and so does little Kalo. I promise to do what you say and try to find love again. lowering my brown again as my odd colored orbs looked right into his, and my long pink tongue came out and gently licked his body lovingly. I’ll try and remember his name. I do understand what is going on. I will do my very best to make you proud of me, like I was proud of you. Despite that I was not showing any emotion it was because I had learned to hold it in, for a while. I learned that in Hollow Woods, and I have never changed, apart from a do so a little more emotion now and again, but if he looked deep into my odd colored orbs you could see that I was very sad, and a little angry as well, not at Arian though. Those darn mutts are going to get it

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[Sohalia]

Arian

I knew that she would make me proud and I knew that she would take care of are daughter that we had. I then used all my strength and raised my cerebrum towards her and nuzzled her one last time, taking in her scents. Then my copper lanterns lids closed white my whites rolled white. I then fell upon the earth. I was lifeless, I was died. I used my last strength to let her know that I loved her and she made me proud.

I then let my spirit raise from the died carcass on the earth while I rose into the air. I whisper to her once more. I love you. Just call if you are in any harm. With that I went to heaven to be with my love ones that passed. I would always be with rene and kalo at there sides. I knew that she would find love again and be happy. But I will be here waiting for her when she passes too.

[Nevaeh]

Renegade

As I watched his body go from life to motionless body lying on the ground. There was no way just be looking at me I was sad and a little angry. As I gave one last look at this place know as The Graveyard. Shaking my crown a little sadly, I was not going to let my emotions get a hold of me, not out in the open and definitely not at this place. I gave moved away from Arian’s motionless body, and reared upon my hind ivory white pillars, while forelegs pawed the air angrily, I was even surprised at myself how long I had kept myself on my hind legs. As I came back down towards the earth, I galloped away from the graveyard and back to my home.

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