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[moxygurl♥]

How on earth she had ended up here was beyond the crimson mare’s comprehension. Honestly she had just started walking and this is the spot where her legs had finally given way, begging for the stocky bodice to stop and rest. Even thought it was spring time the air in these mountains still held a tinge of chill. As if they were not ready to give up the cover of wintry weather. But the slight bite to the air did not bother her that much. It was a reprieve from the wet season the land had just experience.

Moxie stood still, tail gently swayed tickling her ankles and dusting away the pests that came with the warmer weather. Things in Knife’s Edge had not been easy. If anything they had been confusing. To the point where the feminine did not know where she stood. One moment she had been Queen of the land, and the next both her and Eclipse had been knocked off their pedestal. And then the territory had gone quiet. She did not know the new lord and lady of the topography, and truthfully didn’t care.

Blowing air roughly from her nares the vixen shook her head. Her mind seemed more clouded over than it should be. White pillars picked their way along the ground, avoiding contact with the rivers that were carving their way away from the mountain tops as the snow caps began to melt away their winter weight. It seemed quite enough here. Almost too quiet. Oh wells, more time for this coppery beauty to pick her brain.

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Comments: not my best beginning post. But my moxie muse is slightly rusty.

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[Sohalia]

Anna Lee
I Feel Dead!



Look At Me!


I moved into the land known as Artic Heights. My thick winter coat was beginning to shred and shown my new healthy coat that laid under it. I lower my cerebrum toward the earth as my nares flares to take in any scents that might be lurking upon the new tall flora. But I did caught someone's scent. It came from the dark lands like myself. I pushed forward through the green knee high flora as I closed in on the scent like a pack of blood hounds. It was then I lifted up my painted cerebrum, copper lanterns scanning my surroundings. It was then I notice a blood red horse standing a few yards before me. I let out a slight snort to let the soul knew I was there. Sentinels raised forth as I listen to any sounds that the soul might give toward me. At first glance, I thought that it was my grandfather Chaos. But it wasn't.

I could feel the thought pushing through my mind. The pictures of blood and a die soul upon the ground. The soul looked like my father, Intrepid, laying there died, with his blood flowing out of him and drowning the earth near him. I could feel the angry rush through my yearling bodice as I stood there tense looking at the mare. But I still could see the pictures of my father laiding on the earth die. My copper lanterns narrow in on the chestnut mare. But then as it started it was gone. The pictures and thoughts of my father. I could feel a lump form upon my throat as I wanted to ball up and go running to my father and cry. But that would show weakness. I then just shallowed the lump. My copper lanterns still on the mare, but now return to a calm stage as before.

I moved forth toward her while the grass tickled my knees. I then came to a halt within a few feet from the other soul. I then began to speak out toward her. Hello there, I'm Anna Lee, Princess of Hollow Woods. Who might you be ms? Indeed for someone that was raised in one of the darkness lands on this island. I had some manners. But then again I believe that would change when I gotten older.

[moxygurl♥]

Harks flickered around as she caught the sound of hoof beats upon the ground. Even though they were faint in the lush undergrowth, it was still easy to hear them. Brown orbs glanced about before her dial moved with the optics to fixate upon a younger mare approaching. The fem could sense she was from another dark land. But unlike Moxie, she was pure. This red vixen was of the neutral sorts that just happened to catch the eye of a shadowy stag.

The painted filly before her seemed hesitant at her approach. That caught her attention almost instantly. It’s not like Mox was scary, oh no. Far from it, especially when compared to the other creatures that roamed the darker lands. Maybe she was just thinking. That could very well be it. Well here she was again, over thinking stuff. An annoying habit that just wouldn’t die away. Sometimes however it did come in handy, but not all the time. I usually just created more headaches.

Her quarter horse built mass rotated so that she was facing the other fea head on. It was not like her to just walk away from someone that would be rude. No matter what sort of eeriness surrounded them. After all the old saying goes: don’t judge a book by its cover. “Greetings Anna Lee. I’m Moxie, just a mare from Knife’s Edge. At least I was, I still might be though.” The female’s lyrics escaped her velvety muzzle. Curiously she noted that Anna Lee was much more polite than some. Well it was good to see that not all evil equines were attention whores who always had to have the first bite.

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[Sohalia]

Anna Lee
I Feel Dead!



Look At Me!

I notice that the chestnut mare was full blooded Quarter Horse. Indeed I had the lines of the Quarter Horse in my blood as well. My mother Droja was Quarter Horse and my father Intrepid was a Arabian. I held the stocky bodice of the quarter horse blood, but I was graceful like a Arabian. I then let a slight smirk form upon my painted mug while I notice how she turn to face me. Then I knew that indeed she lived in the darkness. How did I know? Not turning her back to me. Smart Choice. I then notice her words that she spoken toward me. So she lived at Knife's Edge. I then began to think where that was letting it clicked in my brain cells. But altho this mare lived in the darkness. I didnt think she was dark. I would say somewhere along the lines of Neutral. But that was fine by me.

I looked up toward the snow cap mountains. I some what admired the beauty of them. Then my copper lanterns fell back to the mare that stood before me. I then began to speak toward her, my tone was held in a normal tone toward her. Well Moxie, I hope that everything is okay for you there. I'm glad that I'm only a yearling still and don't have to worry about all that stuff yet. But I know the day is coming where I would have to. I then took in a deep breath while I took in the spring air. I was glad to see the white blanket of snow melt into the earth's surface. I was also glad to see the birds of death return home into the dark lands. The ravens that was. I loved how they singed there songs through out the land.

[moxygurl♥]

Though she had already established a home for herself and those necessary things, Moxie was still unfamiliar with the people that lived about the area. In truth the only other animal she had talked to was Eclipse. Now a day he was rarely seen by the scarlet mare. Oh well, ramblings and worries of a small mind. Hopefully wandering about and chit-chatting with people would give her more of a stance in life than just a shadow on the pathway. Wither she made friends or enemies it was no big deal.

Audits tipped forward to cup the words the flowed from the other mare. A small smile curled the vixen’s muzzle. “Heh, you’re time shall come soon enough.” Brown eyes flickered away from the other equine for a moment to think about what should be done about her situation. But quickly they returned to land upon her duo colored pelt. Another thought had crossed her mind. If this filly was a princess, why was she out wandering about? But then again was it really any of her business?

Stepping forward the slightest bit, Mox was testing something as well as just being curious. Treading on thin ice was something that this fem did often. More so to figure things out than to get into trouble. “My inquiring mind wishes to know why you are out and about. Just enjoying the scenery or something?” her red boa arched slightly as thorns remained fixated upon their target. Though usually Moxie did not care about the alliance of others, she was jumpy today for some reason or another.

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[Sohalia]

Anna Lee
I Feel Dead!



Look At Me!

I listen to the chestnut minx as she talked to me. I knew that her first set of words was true. Indeed that this mare was older than myself and held more wisdom than me in this world. But I also knew that I would learn everything that I should learn in time, by my mistakes and what comes normal to my brain. So I wasn't in no big hurry. But it was her next set of words toward me that I listen too. Her tone was soft spoken and didn't want to cause any harm. I really didn't understand with the true dark lines running through me I had some manners toward others. Maybe this was just me. Maybe I would grow out of it. I wasn't sure.

I notice as she step forward toward me. My painted carcass slightly tense while my copper lantern scans over her. I could see any warning signs of her leaping forth toward me to fight. I was just recovering from a fight with my Aunt as we was the same age. I then gave out a slight chuckle. Indeed we was restless filly's of the land. My mind then snapped back into the world around me. There I still stood scanning softly over the mare. But then my carcass untense as it now relax. I then began to speak forth toward her once more. I'm just out and about. I'm also thinking about a few things. What about you Moxie?

I let my sentinels lends forth while I listen to any words that she might speak out toward me, but not a sound so far. I then began to think things over once more, letting my mind run away with me again. I thought about many random thoughts. But the main one was why I seen my father laiding on the earth. Couldn't figure it out. I then began to speak toward Moxie once more. Moxie? Haven't you ever seen something in your mind that shouldn't be there? My copper lanterns looks up to her. I wasn't sure if it was just me or my bipolar disorder that my father pasted down to me.

[moxygurl♥]

Big brown eyes noticed the other fae tense up, but then slowly relax once again. The ruby vixen held back a small smile. So even though Anna Lee seemed calm and quiet she was ready to spring into action should something come up. Moxie liked that in another. Still this mare was not that sort to just up an attack for no reason. She would have to be severely provoked before performing such an action. Her demeanor may seem cruel sometimes but she was more passive aggressive than anything else.

Then radars pricked forward at her words, this time her smile was allowed to be shown upon her kissers. “I’ll have to say that great minds think a like then. I’m just wandering about trying to clear this jumbled mess that seems to have taken residence in my mind.” the fem stated in her smooth voice with a slight joking tone to it.

Once again the red mare stood listening to the lyrics that came from the painted filly. This time her dial tilted slightly to the side as if not completely understanding the question. “You mean like illusions, mirages, and that sort of things? Kind of like when your imagination plays tricks on you?” she seemed to think about her answer for a moment. There was many times where in dark places her mind would cause her to be overly skittish as to what just might be stalking the shadows. “I’ll have to say that that has happened to me a few times. But it is not a common thing.”

Curiosity towards the younger equine took over once again. There was something beneath the surface that was bothering her. Moxie was usually a good judge of character. But she could not pin point the issue just yet. Perhaps it was a mental illness or just a young one’s mind playing tricks on her.

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[Sohalia]

Anna Lee
I Feel Dead!



Look At Me!


I let my copper lanterns make direct contact with the other mare as we began to speak more deeper that others would when the just first met. You can say that I kicked it off with Moxie and this is the first time I meet anyone outside of Hollow Woods. But she wasn't going to know that, not right now. It was then I heard the words that she spoke towards me. So she was here for the same reasons that I was eh? To think and relief stress from our minds. I then began to wonder what she could be thinking about. But then I already knew from the first set of words that she spoke toward me. just a mare from Knife’s Edge. At least I was, I still might be though. I then began to think what would I do if I was in her place. I then began to speak towards her as if I tried to help. Moxie, if your thinking about Knife Edge. There is one thing I have learn. Do what makes you happy and don't let nothing stand in your way. Find someone who will love you for you. I then arched my painted neck in a Arabian form while I began to think, maybe she wasn't thinking about that at all.

It was then her next set of words that hit me. I then began to think to myself. It could have been a mirage I seen. But it was just flashes like a picture. But then again it was so real like. I could hear the birds. I then let out a slight snort towards myself as I was tired of thinking about it. I didn't want to see them pictures again, not in my lifetime. But I had a feeling that I would. I then began to speak towards her. My tone was somewhat confused. I dunno what I mean, its hard to explain.

[moxygurl♥]

The mare’s expression softened and gave way to a warm smile. For a dark this filly seemed relatively nice. It was somewhat surprising. Her poll was help elevated as ears remained fixed upon the equine in front of her. “Thanks.” Was the female’s reply. The cherry bodice took a few friendly steps forward. “Ya know something? You’re alright kid.” Moxie stated with a slight chuckle. There usually was not many people that she complimented and warmed up to. But it just came easily to her all of a sudden.

Again her pools drifted over the other feminine’s features. Whatever it was on her mind was really bothering her. Perhaps it was much deeper than just her imagination. Moxie had heard of different mental things wrong with others. There had been a few in her old herd that had had a few ‘issues’ and were dismissed as to not cause problems. “It’s okay Hun, you don’t have to explain anything. Words always tend to mess things up anyway.” the older mare said.

Then her attention flickered about the landscape once again. It really was beautiful this time of year. Blue birds were returning to the trees as well as some of the other wild life that usually flourished during this season. Mox was just glad it wasn’t cold. Though snow was fun to play in and throw about, after a few hours in it you just tended to want to find a warm place to curl up in.

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Comments: I have no idea where “Hun” came from. Lol. I guess Moxie can be sort of motherly-ish. >,>

[Sohalia]

Anna Lee
I Feel Dead!



Look At Me!

I watched her mug soften towards me. I wonder what went through her mind. I then heard the word Thanks that she spoke towards me. I then wanted to smack myself. Indeed she was more wiser and already knew that. I gave out a slight blush as a little child would do. I watched her take a few steps toward me. This time I didn't tense. I didn't feel threaten, but then her next words got to me. "Ya know something? You’re alright kid." I let my copper lanterns looks toward the earth. While things began to run in my mind. I had some of the darkness lines in my blood. I lived in the most feared place on MA and I was the princess. Should I be this nice to others? My mother and father loved hurting others through words. But maybe I wasn't the same as them. But then again, my mother told me once before. "Anna darkness is in your blood. You may not act like it now. But trust me. When your older it will catch up to you and it will take over your mind." It was like I went back to that day as I could hear my mothers breath and her words. The silents of the darkness.

I then let my copper lanterns drift forward upon the blood red mare. I let a slight smirk upon my painted mug while I then spoke towards her. Thank you Moxie. I can say the same for you too. I then listen to the silent between us for a second and then her next words hit my tiny pink eardrums. I shook my yearling cerebrum towards her. I then began to speak once more. Indeed words always seem to find they way. But that's when you look inside. But I'm always going to be swear up in my head. I then notice what I said about myself. Indeed I would never be right upstairs. It was like my brain was fried with drug abuse, but the bad thing is. I never taken drugs. I then wanted to tell Moxie about my disorder, but I just met her and could I trust her with such a thing. I let out a slight sigh while I began to speak out towards her. I was born with a Bipolar disorder. It runs in my genes. If I ever have children, they might also carry the disorder.

[moxygurl♥]

Crimson cranium nodded thanks to her comment. Again she was somewhat shocked that darker equine was being so well-mannered. In the back of her mind she had a feeling that maybe this would not last for long, just like small stage in life that one quickly grows out of. But each individual was different in the workings of the mind.

The fem was listening to the younger one’s story. Genetics weren’t something that you choose, so you were stuck with them. Like the old saying goes: ‘you can pick your friends but not your family’. Though sometimes even with the best of blood lines flukes occur. But the way Anna described it this was not a random mutation, but something that had been pasted down the genetic lineage for a while.

To be honest Moxie felt slightly sorry for the filly. She had been cursed with something and now was forced to deal with it. And from the things that this red mare had heard about bipolar equines, well it just wasn’t pretty. Still the painted one seemed like a strong enough fae. With the right guidance and help she would be able to live with this issue. But of course that counted this vixen out as a tutor, for she knew absolutely nothing about it. “Well it seems quiet a burden has been placed upon your shoulders. Is there no one you can question to better understand this disorder?” Of course there probably were. But who really wanted to go up to some one and be like: ‘Hey can you help my out? This bipolar stuff is confusing.’?

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[Sohalia]

Anna Lee
I Feel Dead!



Look At Me!


I listen to the words that the older mare spoken toward me. I nodded my painted cerebrum toward her. Indeed I did have someone to talk to. I had my wicked father, I knew that if there was a problem to big for me to handle I could go running to daddy and he would save me and stand by my side. I knew that this disorder was something that he had. He already tryed to talk to me about this. But this was something that he couldn't help. I then began to speak out toward her. Indeed Moxie. I can talk to my father.

You could tell that the Spring was in the air as the blood sucking pest began to land upon my flesh. I swung my yearly whip at them to get them off me. I then knew that it would be time to be heading back toward Hollow Woods now. I then let my voice speak out once more toward her. Its nice to meet you Moxie, but I have to be going. I hope that everything goes while with you. I then turn as my painted carcass as I disappeared into the shadows.


[Sorry. I was running out of muse for this thread. If you still want to carry on. Its fine or maybe we could have them meet up later.]