You Will Never Take Away My Pride [Amira]

[! CHOCOLATE BUNNY !]

AMIRA VS. MARGARITA

For . . . . Queen Of Zion Desert

* Five attacks, One per post. 1 dodge each. No killing or banishing allowed. [I want you to bleed, Baby doll]

* No word limit, We're both big girls. 100 words is the minimum, You don't have to have big posts. [You don't need a diaper, Unless you're still a little foal]

* If I win then I get your spot, Simple as that. [That spot should be mine anyway]

* If you win then you get to keep your spot and I become a worthless herd mare. [I shouldn't, You should]

* I go first, Scared darling? [You should be, I will eat you alive if I have to]

* No kicks to your precious stomach, We don't want to kill that little unborn foal now do we? [I will but I won't since I'm too nice but too cruel to do that plus the king, Indigo says that there will be no kicks to your stomach]

Get ready baby doll, I'm up first!

[! CHOCOLATE BUNNY !]

MARGARITA

If you feel so empty
So used up, so let down
If you feel so angry
Just get up
Let's start a riot

My grey pillars extended as I walked forward gracefully. I smiled as I made my way to the battle field, Getting pumped for my fight with Amira, A mare who got the position that I deserved. I could feel the adrenaline rushing through my veins as I walked forward. The thunder rumbled over head and the trees moaned as the cold wind blew at the trees and rustled their leaves. I could see the lightning flash overhead as I walked forward, The wind blowing through my tassels. The mood was perfect for a fight. I was ready to start a riot.

If you feel so filthy
So dirty so fucked up
If you feel so walked on
So painful so pissed off

I approached the battle field, I could see it as I pushed past the bushes. I saw something cross my path, Running away in terror. I shed and I reared up, Pawing at the air startled. "Mira por donde va!" I screamed after the terrified animal. I sighed, Calming myself before the fight so I wouldn't be so high strung while I was fighting. I didn't want to so how reckless I could be, That would be bad if Indigo just so happened to be watching. I thought about my daughter, Margret. I remembered the day she was born, That was the happiest day of my life. Her life was short, Dying when she got to the shores of MA. Thinking of the day she died brought back so many memories and many tears.

You're not the only one
Refusing to back down
You're not the only one
So get up

As I reached the battle field, I smiled. I was ready for anything and everything Amira was going to throw at me. "Ven aquí, Baby Doll! No me digas que estás miedo de mí? No muerden, mucho" I called out, Wondering if she wasn't a chicken. I looked forward, Holding my crown high. I let out a soft nicker as I broke into a smooth gallop. I shot forward, Trying to beat her to her spot on the field. I let out a cackle as I galloped around in circles, Grow impatient with each circle. "Quiero que sangran, sangrado fuera en el frío, la tierra dura" I said in a catty voice, My warrior antics trying to fight their way out of my kissers. I let out a strong yet light and playful cackle as I watched for the pregnant mare.

The Riot Girl;; Margarita
The Riots;; 493
The Many Riot Comments;; Okay so this is the start of the fight between Margarita and Amira. Hope you like the post!
Translations;;
Mira por donde va!= Watch where you're going!

Ven aquí, Baby Doll! No me digas que estás miedo de mí? No muerden, mucho= Come here, Baby Doll! Do not tell me you're afraid of me? Do not bite much

Quiero que sangran, sangrado fuera en el frío, la tierra dura= I want you to bleed, Bleed out onto the cold, Hard ground
Lyrics;; Riot- Three Days Grace

[Nevaeh]

Amira

As I made my way towards the battle grounds, my golden pillars stopped on the edge of the battle grounds, I stood on the edge of the battle ground thinking was I doing the right think fighting while I was in foal, should I not just turn and runaway? No I’m not a chicken, I’m a light and I will fight and not run. As I got myself into the right mind to fight, I slowly made my way over the border of the battle grounds No turning back now.

About halfway in a heard a loud roar of thunder in the distance which made me jump a little bit to the left hand side and when I saw the flash of white light not far from where the battle grounds are, hearing the trees making a very spooky creaking sound, made me very scared about being here, but I tried my best to put that in the back of my mind and get ready to fight.

Dark Palomino auds pinned back into and underneath my white mane, so that they were not see as a target by the other mare. Then my darker colored orbs saw the greyish colored mare. I then stretched out my dark golden neck while my greyish blackish colored maw opened while my ivories where out, I was hoping to get her on her chest.

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Horse: Amira
Muse: Good so far
Comment: Hope you like it.

[! CHOCOLATE BUNNY !]

MARGARITA

If you feel so empty
So used up, so let down
If you feel so angry
Just get up
Let's start a riot

I stood on the battle field, Waiting for the royal queen herself to come and greet me. My ebony mane blew in the wind as I waited, The faint sound of the trees blowing in the wind made me feel excited. I could hear the sound of an approaching equine and I saw the palomino vixen make her way towards me. I grinned at her as she approached me, Getting closer and closer with each step. I looked at her swollen barrel as she got closer. Indigo told me not to attack her stomach, He didn't want to lose his unborn foal. She came at me, Baring her fangs at me, Aiming for my cage. I let her hit me, I wouldn't be a little baby by dodging a bite to my cage. I flinched in pain as I felt the crimson liquid ooze out of the wound. It trickled down my cage and fell to the ground, Making a small crimson puddle on the hard ground. I let out a light chuckle as I smiled at her, Enjoying the pain. "It's my turn now, Baby doll" I said to her, Speaking English to her for the first time. I laughed as I picked up a smooth gallop. I closed in on her, My dark chocolate orbs in a narrowed glare. I went her her left and I got behind her rump. I let out a loud, Light chuckle as I reared up on my hind pillars. I inhaled, Breathing for a while. I let out a loud battle cry as I dropped down to all fours. I backed away from her rump, Making sure that she wouldn't try to buck at me and hit me in the face.

If you feel so filthy
So dirty so fucked up
If you feel so walked on
So painful so pissed off

I tossed my silver head up, My ebony forelock flying away from my forehead. I smiled at Amira, My smile was warm but dangerous. The thunder rumbled overhead as the lightning lit up the sky. I looked at Amira, Wondering if she would jump at the sudden burst of thunder that broke the silence. I felt the blood from the wound on my cage start to harden. I felt a strong stinging in my cage as I moaned in pain. I shook my silhouette, Trying to make the pain disappear. I still felt the pain after I tried to shake it away. 'Damn it! This bitch can cause me pain. This wound is gonna hurt later but maybe my first attack caused more pain to her than she caused to me' I thought, Looking at her curiously. I grinned at her, Wondering if she knows the danger that she is putting herself and her foal in. "Do you know the danger you're putting yourself in? Not to mention the danger you're putting your foal in" I said to Amira as the thunder rumbled again. I grinned at her, Trying to be friendly.

You're not the only one
Refusing to back down
You're not the only one
So get up

I reared up, The adrenaline flowing in my veins. The thunder and lightning making me even more pumped to fight. "Is the thunder too scary for you, Baby doll?" I asked her in a catty voice. I came back down onto all fours again and I was off, Shooting forward at a fast gallop. I circled her like a lion circles it prey. I started to think about my next attack. This fight is going to get better, Way better.

The Riot Girl;; Margarita
The Riots;; 628
The Many Riot Comments;; Hehe. I like her attack. Hope you like my post and I just adored yours, Nevvy!
Translations;; No Spanish words so no translations. Next post will have Spanish.
Lyrics;; Riot- Three Days Grace
Her Riot Attack;; Rita was aiming to hit Amira on either her croup or her dock with her two front hooves.

[Nevaeh]

Amira

keeping my golden auds pinned underneath my white mane, when my pink tongue came out, I wrinkled my nose when I got the taste of blood eww, I did not like that at all. When I saw her eyes narrowed mine only narrowed a little bit, i really did not like being here, where am I here? I want to go home to sleep. when I heard her lyrics, I remembered to keep my golden auds down Oh she does speak English. That’s good, but also bad. my dark ebony orbs watched as she went around the left hand side of my dark golden body. My heart was beating so fast that I was scared off this battle, why did I agree? Why did I not just wait until after the foal was born? I know why cause I’m not a chicken, I’m a horse, a light horse and I’m proud to be one.

I was to busy thinking to remember that Margarita was right behind my rump until I felt her sharp points of her hooves landing upon my croup, which made my hind legs give away almost all the way towards the hard ground, when I turned my crown around towards the left hand side of my golden body I noticed that I had crimson running down my hind legs, on to the ground right behind my legs, Darn it that is going to hurt a lot more later. I snorted when I felt the pain coming though my body, to make it even worse the foal decided to give a large kick into the right hand side of my stomach.

Then out of the peace and quite I heard the thunder which did make me jump a little side ways towards the right hand side of the battle grounds, but the thunder was not the bad part, when my dark ebony orbs saw the flash of white light, I jumped back a little bit, which made me give a little squeak, as the pain shot up though my back. seeing her gallop off like a prey I knew fine well I could not go that fast, I watched for a few seconds thinking about my next attack.

I moved my gait into a slow trot over towards the greyish colored mare, lifting my body a little bit of the ground, while I was close enough to her body, I reached out with my front legs hoping to reach the right hand side of her stomach. Once I had done that I backed off a little bit. Missy Bossy boots Speaks English.

[/size] I gave a little cute smile after I had said that, the tree make a spooky noise was making me a little nervous about being here.

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Nevvy's Notes
Horse: Amira
Muse: good
Comments: I hope u like. I liked your post

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[! CHOCOLATE BUNNY !]

MARGARITA

If you feel so empty
So used up, so let down
If you feel so angry
Just get up
Let's start a riot

The eerie sound of the trees filled my ears as Amira took my blow. I let out a light chuckle as her pillars almost buckled under her. I could feel the tension in the air start to build up with more suspense as the fight went along. I laughed at her foolish words. 'Miss Bossy Boots? That's the funniest name I've ever heard!' I thought, Looking at her. "Miss Bossy Boots? Ahaha! That's the stupidest name ever!" I said, Cracking up. I laughed at her when I saw her come to the right side of my stomach. When her front pillars made contact with my stomach I heard a loud crack as I spat out the crimson liquid. I looked at the ground and saw my own crimson blood splatter the ground in front of me. I looked back at my stomach, Trying to see if she made more than a bruise and a broken bone or two. I saw the purple mark on my stomach where her hooves struck. I didn't know what happened next but I was looking at her from the hard ground. I thought about my next attack when something came to me, I could fake her out then attack. I smiled at her as I got back up. I bowed down to her and I looked at her, Smiling at her. "I'm sorry that I challenged you. Forgive me?" I asked her, Smiling at her. I looked down at her front legs, Trying to decide which one I wanted to hit. I chose the right one, Thinking it was weaker. I bared my teeth and I tried to bite at her cannon, Trying to break the bone.

If you feel so filthy
So dirty so fucked up
If you feel so walked on
So painful so pissed off

I trotted away from her, Laughing. "Not!" I said over my shoulder. I looked at her and I wondered if she would give up. I thought she looked like a weakling, Her attacks weren't that affective but they did their damage, Especially to my cage. I still felt the burn in my cage from the bite wound. My stomach hurt the most, The rib she broke hurt my whole entire side, Making my side burn with pain. I looked back at my side and I saw the purple bruise, It looked a little bigger and swollen. I looked forward, The thunder rumbled the sky as it got even darker. The eerie sounds zoned out all other noises except my heavy breathing. I started to circle her, My walk was slow, Like a tiger stalking it's prey. I looked at her, My dark brown eyes narrowed at her curiously. "What's the matter baby doll? Shocked? Maybe you are, Maybe you aren't, I will never know unless you tell me. Are you going to tell your best friend yet worst enemy? I'm waiting and grow impatient very quickly" I said to her, Brushing against her right side as I walked by her. I looked at the damage I caused her with my first attack. Her croup looked damaged, Indented almost. I was determined to beat her, To take that pretty little crown right off her crown and put it on my own. My ebony mane blew in the wind as I grinned at her, My fangs looking striking and dangerous. I could hear something stirring in the woods behind me, Trying to decide whither or not to show their face and get killed in the process. I looked back at the woods, Seeing a wolf walking through the bushes on her way to feed her pups. I laughed as she started to run, Startled by my sudden burst of laughter. I looked back at Amira, Smirking at her. I walked forward, Extending my Grey pillars as I moved closer to her. I walked around her, Examining her movements and her whole appearance. I felt like a tiger, Waiting to pounce on the palomino vixen. The lightning lit up the sky as I reared up, My hind legs positioned on her flank as I reared. I felt like a wicked witch, Rearing up when the lightning streaked the sky. I grinned at the back of her crown, Waiting for her to make her move. I came back down, Landing on all fours again. I took off, Galloping off but making a sharp right turn to go back to her and face her head on. I lifted my head gracefully as I galloped forward, Heading towards the palomino vixen. I looked deep into her eyes, Daring her to attack me. I laughed in her face as I turned my rump towards her.

You're not the only one
Refusing to back down
You're not the only one
So get up

The sky opened up just as I turned my rump towards her. I looked up as the rain poured down on our fight. I smiled as I picked up a smooth trot. I tossed my head up, My wet mane and forelock flying off my neck and forehead. My whole silhouette was wet but I didn't care, The rain felt good on my canvas. I bent my boa to itch my cannon as the rain let up a little. I looked up at the dark sky, Wondering if the rain would come back and clean my wounds so they won't get infected. I smiled at Amira as the rain came down again. I felt my wounds sting and I could tell that they were infected. I groaned as I got closer to Amira, Wondering if she wanted the rain to continue or to stop. I wanted it to continue, Rain makes the battle intense. "Hope you don't mind the rain baby doll, It's just a little drizzle" I said to her as the rain poured down on us, Drenching our canvas' even more. I smiled at her, Daring her to put her unborn foal in more danger than it is right now.

The Riot Girl;; Margarita
The Riots;; 1,029
The Many Riot Comments;; Ahahaha! Fake out! I like it Nevvy!
Translations;; No Spanish, Yet again!
Lyrics;; Riot- Three Days Grace
Her Riot Attack;; She tried to bite Amira's front right cannon, Trying to break her bone.

[Nevaeh]

Amira

Hearing the sky open as cool drops of water splashed onto my darker golden palomino body, as soon as land upon my body a heard like a hissing noise like a warning from a snake ready to strike, as I turned my now darker and wet crown turned towards the left to look where the snake was coming from, but instead of seeing a snake I saw something that I really hate in was those stupid mutts, my narrows eyes where to busy focused on the spooky yellow eyes starting back staring out from the darker shadows of the battlegrounds. Oh so the wolf wants something to eat. Well that is not going to be me.

Another loud roar of thunder, and the as quick as a camera flash, the white light brightened up the darker black sky, which also brought me out of my staring game with the wolf eyes in the shadow. Everything here was so spooking to me, and then the water splashed and hit against my golden body. My chocolate brown orbs were blurring since the rain was coming down so hard, and making the light brown sand, turn into a dark mud pit. Suddenly I hear the bossy mares hooves coming closer and closer towards me, and wham blood stained ivories where clamped onto my right cannon bone. Well you are a bossy boots, because you like to bossy everyone and everything even little bugs like me, so you are one.

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As she looked me right in my chocolate colored orbs daring me to attack her right then and there, suddenly as I began to move my right leg buckled underneath me, which made the whole of my front body go down with the shock of the pain from the attack she had just done. Getting myself ready I then I saw her rear right near me yet again, and hearing her battler call made me shiver in my mind, because I did not want to show that I am a lot weaker then her.

Thinking about my next attack i looked as she pretend to be a lion stalking their prey. That all you can do behave like a lion? Or are you a stupid mutt in a horses body?[/size] my lyrics were not as sweet as last time I had opened my blackish colored maw. pushing my large belly and saw croup to the breaking point, trotting along towards where she was, I was running toward her side again, but as soon as I was close enough, I quickly changed my direction towards her rump, as I came around towards her rump, I began to rear slowly on to my weak hind legs, as I came down with my sharp blackish muddy crimson mixed hooves, hoping to a lot of damage to her dock area, quickly I moved back after my attack, I the deicide to be have like a wolf, I began to walk slowly around her, as my wet mane stuck like superglue had been place on my golden neck. Missy bossy miss, I’m afraid on your part I do like the rain.

I then arched my neck against my chest, then I saw the red trail of blood on the muddy sand underneath my hooves, thunder and lighting roared right over the battlegrounds as if someone was controlling the volume the roar got louder and louder. With one very big bang, I gave a loud sequel as pain shot though my body, looking around towards my stomach I then noticed that I was on the muddy ground, How on earth did I get down here. I was wishing this fight was over right now, but no way on earth would I back down from a fight. trying to look up from were I had fallen down, trying to find out where the ghostly looking mare had got to, bringing my crown back down after a while, I saw a red puddle underneath my right front leg, Darn it see must of done more damage then I thought she had. My heart was racing so fast because I was so scared, but the most important part for me was that I was being to tire from the fight and carrying a heavy weight inside my barrel.

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Nevvy's Notes:
Horse: Amira
Muse: Very good
Comments: My longest post ever. 3rd attack by me
Word count: 712 above wavvy line

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[! CHOCOLATE BUNNY !]

MARGARITA

If you feel so empty
So used up, so let down
If you feel so angry
Just get up
Let's start a riot

The weather started to lighten up a little bit with every attack, It was like it could tell when the five attacks were being used up. I looked up at the sky as it flashed with lightning. I smiled as the rain hit my grey crown, Drenching me even more. I closed my eyes and I let the rain take me away from this battle, On a roller coaster ride. My mind snapped back to Amira as I felt a sharp pain on my dock. The pain traveled up my spine as I began to numb up. I couldn't feel the pain but I knew it was there, I could tell by the way my whole back numbed up. I blanked out next, The numbing went to my brain for a little. I didn't remember much next, Just hitting the hard ground and my right side hurting and burning like hell. I remembered looking up at her, Wondering if she was going to ignore the rules and kill me. The last thing I remembered was the bottom half of my silhouette starting to numb up.

If you feel so filthy
So dirty so fucked up
If you feel so walked on
So painful so pissed off

The sky looked so dark when I opened my orbs. I moved my crown a little when I realized that I was on the ground, Half of my silhouette paralyzed. I blinked as I tried to stand, My back pillars were too numb to support me so I fell back down. When I crashed to the ground, My right side being crushed on the ground. I let out a loud squeal as the pain from my right side started to kick in, Taking it's toll on me. I tried to find the strength to stand up with my front and back pillars. I finally stood after three tries. I looked down at my two front pillars and I gasped, My front pillars were shaking like a little girl who was about to be killed. I looked back at my dock and I saw the crimson liquid oozing out of the wound she made when she stuck her hooves into my dock. It seeped out of the wound and trickled down my haunch, Slowly making it's way to the ground using my haunch and pillars to make it. I took one step, Making sure I could walk with my back pillars. My pillars were unstable but they worked for the most part. I grinned at Amira as I made my way toward her. The vixen's words cut off my walk as I snarled at her. "I'm an equine but I can act like a lion if I want to. I can also act like a wolf. You're down there because you're a little weakling, Baby doll" I said to her, Chuckling at her as I walked by her. I brushed against her whole left side with my bloody right haunch, Making my way to her right side. I looked at her left side as I walked, Watching the smear of blood engulf her side. I walked around her rump and I made my way to her palomino boa. I turned my silhouette around so she was looking at my bloody rump while I was looking at her palomino rump. I grinned as I bared my fangs, Getting ready to attack her. I made a swift motion with my boa, Aiming for her jugular vein with my bloodstained teeth. I moved away from her silhouette, Making sure that she didn't try to counter my attack by attacking me in the process. I circled her in a collected trot, Watching her movements, Her emotions.

You're not the only one
Refusing to back down
You're not the only one
So get up

I looked at her, Wondering if she was getting tired yet. I might have the advantage since I'm not pregnant with an unborn child like Amira. I looked around, My eyes settling on her barrel. Would her child get hurt by my attacks? Maybe, I hope not though. I would feel terrible if something happened to her foal and it was my fault. I walked closer to her, Making my way to her bulging barrel. I reached down with my boa and I brought my muzzle up to her barrel. I started the nuzzle the unborn foal, Feeling a motherly instinct kicking in. I thought about how strange I would look to the mare but I didn't care, I wanted to make sure that the foal wasn't hurt. I felt a kick near my muzzle and I knew that the foal was still alive. I sighed, Relieved that the little foal wasn't injured or even killed by the fight between its mother and I. My attention was back on Amira, Watching her movement again. I thought she looked tired from the fight. I looked around, My eyes settling on the wolf that was still walked through the bushes. I smiled at her as she came onto the battle field, Trying to kill one of us. I picked up an easy gallop, Closing in on the wolf. I hissed at her, Warning her that I'm not afraid to kill her. I reared up, Ready to hit her on the head, Trying to crack her skull. She yelped as my hooves came down, Hitting one of her front paws. She backed up and I moved forward, Making her scared. She stared at me, Her yellow orbs full of fear. I snorted in pleasure, Happy that she was paralyzed with fear. She ran from me then, Rushing to the shelter of the safe bushes she came from. I laughed as she ran, Comparing her to Amira. I turned away from the scared wolf and I looked at Amira, Daring her to attack me.

The Riot Girl;; Margarita
The Riots;; 1,009
The Many Riot Comments;; I really like your post Nevvy! I hope you like mine!
Translations;; No Spanish, Yet again!
Lyrics;; Riot- Three Days Grace
Her Riot Attack;; She tried to bite Amira, Trying to damage her jugular vein or something around it.

[Nevaeh]

Amira

I gave a little sight of relief as the darker skies began to light up as the battle was nearly done, my dark melt chocolate colored orbs watched as the now darker grey colored mare chased off the beautiful but scary wolf. I knew fine well that female wolves were nothing to be scared off because they were sometimes friendly. Closing my palomino eyelids I drifted off into a beautiful land, that was full of sunshine and peace flowers were blooming towards the sky there were only a few fluffy cotton white clouds in the beautiful blue sky. While I was in the beautiful land, something darker and strange was coming across the beautiful land; suddenly it began to turn from color to a boring darker grey and dreary black color.

It felt like my heart stopped when I opened my eyes all I could see was a the grey mare going the lower part of my palomino neck, I was still to much in my dreamland I saw blood stained colored ivories, from pin tiny dot to large sharp points. I felt as her ivories began piece thought my darker golden skin her teeth felt like a very annoying thorn that got suck in your coat. after she had done her attack I noticed that it was a bit harder for me to breathe.
What I saw next nearly gave me another heart attack, I watched as her wet and bloody colored maw touched my large barrel, I wonder what she was doing and then I felt the a big kick which made me jump a little for the shock of the kick. My dark golden auds began to hurt from being pinned back inside my white mane. I saw her look at me I wonder why, but I had a little feeling she knew that I was getting tired from the fighting and carry a weight of an unborn foal as well did not help me at all.

Being to struggle to my hooves I got up on to all fours, I turned around to see a large patch of red and brown mixed sand where I have been laying down. I tried to but my right front leg down, but I could only use it for a short time, without it hurting. Would you like to carry the weight? Since you seem so interested in my large tummy.

I knew that bringing my auds up was very dangerous because the could be used as a target for an attack, so I only pricked my left aud forward while trying to figure out what the grey mare was doing. Seeing her orbs look right into my darker ones, I kept my orbs locked on to hers for a while. Without warning I lunged forward with my maw open and my ivories out aiming for someone where on her crown.

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Nevvy’s Notes:
Horse: Amira
Muse: erm
Comments: Not as long. I like your post as well

[! CHOCOLATE BUNNY !]

MARGARITA

If you feel so empty
So used up, so let down
If you feel so angry
Just get up
Let's start a riot

The rain was just a light drizzle as I looked at Amira, Waiting for her to make her attack. She came at me, Her bloodstained teeth aiming at my crown. I let her attack me, I wasn't going to dodge a sissy attack. I felt her fangs sink into my forehead, Making a deep bite mark on my forehead. I felt dizzy when she extracted her fangs from my forehead. The blood from my wound trickled down my face in a thick line as it made it's way down to the ground. I felt weak for some reason, Like I lost a bit of brain tissue. I shook my head, Sending warm drops of the crimson liquid flying in the air.

If you feel so filthy
So dirty so fucked up
If you feel so walked on
So painful so pissed off

I looked at the mare and I felt like screaming 'YOU ROTTEN BITCH!' in her face. She was such a little ass that needed to be kicked into place. "No darling. I don't want to go through the pains of child birth. Of course I'm interested, I wanted to make sure I didn't kill my king's newest foal" I said to her, Smiling as I started to circle her. I was trying to decide about my next attack, Should I try to take away some brain tissue like she did to me or try to break her back or something. I could rear up and aim to break her back bone. I grinned and I cantered toward her, Creeping closer to my target. I went around to her rump and I reared up, I was ready to deliver my attack to her. I slammed my front hooves down, Aiming for her lion or withers. I let out an ear piercing battle cry as I got back onto all fours again. I cantered around her again, Waiting to see what damage my attack did.

You're not the only one
Refusing to back down
You're not the only one
So get up

I was getting tired, fighting was pretty hard work. I was growing tired of fighting anyway, It's only something that barbarians do. But I wouldn't give up this fight, I'm no weakling. The way the mare fought was the safe way and the way I fought was just barbaric but smart. I felt like poetry in motion when I fought, moving elegantly. The pain in my head was hurting a lot. The blood was still on my forehead and it was gushing out of the wound on my forehead. I screamed in pain as I crashed to the ground, Taking a break from standing and moving for a little bit. I looked at Amira, Wondering if she wanted to turn and run for the hills or not. "Having fun or is it too painful for you?" I asked her, Wondering how she felt about fighting me. I was getting pretty bored of fighting with her, She wasn't that exciting and she never kept me on my toes, Wondering what she is going to do next.

The Riot Girl;; Margarita
The Riots;; 554
The Many Riot Comments;; I really like your post Nevvy! I hope you like mine!
Translations;; No Spanish, Yet again!
Lyrics;; Riot- Three Days Grace
Her Riot Attack;; She tried to break Amira's lion or withers with a powerful slam of her two front hooves.

[Nevaeh]

Amira

My darker golden coat was shinny as the rain was starting to turn into a lighter drizzle, I decided that both my golden auds were hurting to much from being pinned back, my right foreleg was very numb, I could feel the pain shooting up it, as I began to walk around it felt like I had pins and needles going though. Getting the taste of the greyish mares colored blood in my mouth, I really did not like the taste, but this time compared to the first time I was starting to like the taste of the blood in my mouth. Listening to my hooves making squelching sounds in the wet sandy area of the fight.

Despite the face I was felling tired I let my adrenaline take over for the last part of this battle, my golden auds pinned themselves back underneath my white but red blood stained mane. I was doing my very best at fight, despite the fact, I could feel pain all over my body, and every time I took a breathe in it hurt, and making it even more harder for me to breath. I knew fine well why I was doing this it was for my mate and love the spotted king called Indigo.

Dark chocolate colored orbs locked on the moving target, I heard her screaming vocals which made me wince as the vibration moved though the air and into my auds, I let go off a loud chuckle as what I heard her say. As I stopped walking just moving my crown slowly, as my blood stained blackish opened as my lyrics came out, Well you should never judge a light by its cover.

[/size] I watched as she circled me like she was a lion after its prey, which was in fact making my dizzy watching her as she did it her lion stunt. I watched her go around towards my rump, I still did not move until it felt fight, seeing her front hooves into the air, I watched as slowly motion as her front hooves came down, I the moved my body a little sideway towards the left, I knew now that I had used my doge. Everyone thinks lights are weaklings. Bad for them, just because some of use lights do not like to fight does not mean we a weak little peas.

Lifting my foreleg up a little bit away from the muddy earth, as more pins and needs shot my the let and my neck, and the blood the was still running down her hock area, leaving little droplets of blood landing upon the dirty land. I limped every few strides, I was holding back my squeals of pain. I then left a hard kick from inside my tummy that sent a shiver going thought my body, as my dark chocolate colored orbs looked of the best part of her body to attack next, making my body move into a trot across the muddy and crimson land that splashed up, as I moved along despite the pain that was running though my whole body, I ran straight for the side of her the base of her neck, hoping to damage the base of her neck, my maw was opened I now felt like a tried wolf on its last legs but never giving up hope.

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Nevvy’s Notes:
Horse: Amira
Muse: Good
Comments: last attack and doge done. Last post by me
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[! CHOCOLATE BUNNY !]

MARGARITA

If you feel so empty
So used up, so let down
If you feel so angry
Just get up
Let's start a riot

The rain had disappeared, Running away from the scene of the battle. I grinned as I looked up at the sky, Hoping that the rain would come back and drench my coat again. I looked around, Wondering if there were any witnesses to see my glorious win against the pregnant mare. I wasn't sure if I was going to win but I was hoping to god that I would win, I wanted it more than anything in the world. I sighed, Knowing that I wasn't going to win this battle, I'm just not good enough. I wanted to just stop fighting but I just couldn't give up now, I was too far in. The way I see it, It's either win or die and I wasn't going to die so the only choice is to win. I wasn't going to give up, Giving up is for equines who can't even lift a finger. I was not that type of girl, I'm the tough girl who can take the heat.

If you feel so filthy
So dirty so fucked up
If you feel so walked on
So painful so pissed off

I looked at her while she charged at the base of my neck, Trying to injure my neck base. I giggled at her as she sunk her teeth into my neck base, It didn't hurt, It actually tickled. I laughed even more as she held my neck base, Trying to cause me even more pain. The way she sunk her teeth into my neck base made me smile, She was like a little preschool girl trying to be the big bully. She definitely wasn't the bully, I am. I grinned at her as she extracted her teeth from my neck base, Trying to think of my next and final attack. I was ready to cause some pain to this chick, Ready to make her beg for her life. I grinned again as I crept closer to her, Getting ready to attack her. I looked her right in the eye as I went for her, Head on. I grinned evilly, Ready to attack her head. I bared my bloodstained teeth as I lunged my neck forward, Aiming for the area right in between her ears. I tried to break that bone or damage her nerves and take away some brain tissue. I moved away from her head and I danced around her, Showing off all of my wounds and my bloody body as I danced. The warm crimson liquid was gushing from the wound of my neck base, Causing me a little bit of pain. I grinned at her, Showing off my bloodstained teeth that had some of her skin particles.

You're not the only one
Refusing to back down
You're not the only one
So get up

I felt like a little girl as I danced around her, Trying to make her a little bit worried that she wasn't going to win this fight. I was trying to make her really scared that she wasn't going to win and she was never going to be queen again, That was my goal. I was pleased with myself for fighting so well, The fight was good and not a total waste of my time. I grinned at her, Waiting for her to scream and squeal. "I will hear who won this fight when I get back to the palace, Where we both know that I belong" I said to her, Smirking as I walked away from what was left of our brutal fight. I walked towards Zion Desert, The place that could be my best dream or my worst nightmare. I grinned to myself as I walked, Getting closer and closer to my destination. I was going to see Indigo, The brute that could be my king or the one that I pay respect for. I wanted him to be my mate, Mine and only mine. You might say that I am pretty controlling but that's what makes a good queen, Queens always have to be ready to seize control and take what is theirs and what isn't. The way I see it, Mares are the true king of the world, Taking control of everything and keeping it for as long as they can. No matter what the odds, all mares are total control freaks and we are all proud of it. Us mares are the only thing that keep stallions from going mad.

The Riot Girl;; Margarita
The Riots;; 791
The Many Riot Comments;; Alright so this fight is ready to be judged! This is my last attack and I wish you luck Nevvy!
Translations;; No Spanish, Yet again!
Lyrics;; Riot- Three Days Grace
Her Riot Attack;; she was trying to break the bone between her ears or damage her nerves and take away some brain tissue.

[lynx'']

Margarita VS. Amira

for QUEEN OF ZION DESERT

overall: a good fight, enjoyed reading it, was hard to judge.

Margarita

attack and response one: Slight 'godmoding' on the damage given, not very discriptive. nice wording about surroundings and the character herself. A strange attack...not very realistic. Good spelling, grammar okay.

attack and response two: Don't know if you meant too, but you attakced twice, and it was slight powerplaying - be careful with that, its one of the definate 'no-no's' in RPing.

attack and response three: Again, slight powerplaying with the whole 'touching amira's belly and feeling the foal kick' but a realistic attack ,creative post- i really liked it.

attack and response four: not realistic - a full blown bite from a fully grown horse would cause more than just a 'tickle' nice length, discriptive but please watch your god-moding.

Amira[/b]

attack and response one: could of discribed the surroundings a little more, simple attack but realistic. spelling good, grammar could be improved.

attack and response two: nice use of damage. Unusual attack. But good use of nature (storm/ surroundings)

attack and response three: nice post, discriptive but watch your spelling - a few mistakes there. Again, a little grammar errors. Nice RPing of Amira's weaknesses, its hard that she has to fight when pregnant- limiting her attacks.

attack and response four: nice length, creative post - enjoyed it, wel ldone, spelling and grammar improving.

attack and response five:

RESULTS[/b]

Margaritas' wounds: 1.) Bruised chest, the open wound catches a nasty infection making her very ill. (three seasons to heal, could take much longer if she doesn't rest and take it easy.) 2.) the attack trapped a main nerve in her spin, making it extremely hard to even walk, constant risk of falling due to lack of co-ordination (heals in one season but can't go faster than a trot in case the same occurs again) 3.) Concussion from forehead attack. Frequently becomes dizzy and often faints. (relives in one season) 4.) Bite to neck comes infected and very swollen (heals in one season)

Amira's wounds: 1.) Bruised dock, stiff in the back end, could possibly cause difficulty during birth. (partically lame and stiff for one season.) 2.) Hopping lame on front pillar - chipping connon bone, will heal perfectly with rest but makes it very uncomftablet o move faster than a walk, if she ever fell at an arkward angle, could cause serious damage. (heals in one year) 3.) Swollen glands - makes it hard to breath and could block off air if she gets too wound up or runs for some time. (heals in one season) Cut on throat causes infection (heals in two seasons) 4.) dodged - no damage received. 5.) Concusion - severe dizziness (heals in one season)

Winner

AMIRA

- it took me ages to judge as you both went by the five attack rule. Never the less i did enjoy it. It was hard to judge - i would of rather it been a tie but obviously that wouldn't solve the queen situation. Palo came very close to winning but because of the powerplaying and god-moding, nevaeh just got the lead.

thanks guys- don't forget to RP out your wounds, well done and good luck for your characters in the future!

-LYNX'

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[Nevaeh]

Nevvy and Amira faint. phew. I did enjoy the fight.