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Post by eclipsemidir on Feb 3, 2009 9:23:31 GMT -5
INSANE LAUGHTER
I slowly walked across the border to Hallowed Woods. I looked around, a nice place. I liked Chaos’ choice in land. I eyed the land carefully, no signs of mares or stallions, yet. I knew my insane laugh would be heard if I let it loose. Maybe Chaos or Interpid would come to see. I wouldn’t fight them, I wanted to join them. Wouldn’t they need an insane bastard like me? If they didn’t I would leave and seek out someone who did. I eyed the land one more time before releasing my laughter. It echoed through the land and I knew they could hear it. Anyone within fourteen acres would hear this insane laugh. I reared up on hind legs, still laughing. I was crazy… No… I WAS INSANE!
Character: Insane Laughter – Insane Word Count: 130 Status: Complete Comments: Twisted bastard >D [/size][/color]
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Post by lynx'' on Feb 3, 2009 9:27:49 GMT -5
CHAOS
[/font] You could spill a thousand words and none would mean a thing. [/color] In awaiting herd members to arrive, i had stroleld away from the clearing; leaving Intrepid in charge. Blood clotted on my already red frame, my sides heaved in and out, at a fast pace, breathing was difficult; but not yet impossible. My bruised ribs made it harder to go any faster than a slow trot, but on scenting, and then shortly after; hearing a brute squealing in my lands, my darker tipped audits slammed back into my skull, jaw line tightened and i thrusted forward into a canter, ignoring the pain, as it had been taken over by anger. It wasn't long before i saw the brute. He reared and continued with his laughing, immediatly i slowed and clacked my yellow ivories together, creating a loud echoing noise. Harks still tipped backwards, showing my disaproval of him being here. My optics narrowed in a scowl and i stepped forward, slamming my forehooves into the ground in annoyance. "What the hell do you think your doing here, brute." I spat at him, extending my neck and lunging at him with my teeth. Just a mere warning to the idiotic male that i wasn't in the best of moods. I pulled back, and a low hiss came from my kissers, a stomach pitted growl came deep from my stomach as i watched the brute with tempered eyes, they shone with silver glints as one sun ray managed to jolt through the tightly packed trees. Not much sunlight was visable, though the heat leaked in, making it muggy and almost foggy. The air was thick with heat, and the ground thick with moisture from the moss. I threw a glance sideways as i heard a rustle in a nearby bush, only to discover a lost wolf cub. They were all pretty lost without their leader... Turning my skull back around to this intruder, i slammed my hoof down into the mossy forest floor once again and glared down at him, arabian neck arched, dispite the aching of my muscles. Silky whipcord kinked high. Black eyes staring at him through the gloomy light. "Well?" I demanded, grinding my fangs together through a locked jaw, as i waited impatiently for him to give me answers. Character: Chaos Status: Complete Word Count: 385 Comments: Not a bad post. Clip, could i ask that you don't use that font? It's kinder hard to read... [/size][/color][/blockquote]
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Post by eclipsemidir on Feb 3, 2009 16:05:21 GMT -5
INSANE LAUGHTER
My laughing ceased. I stared Chaos in the eye. His words escaped his lips and amused me. A slight twitch formed a smile at my lips. I eyed his carefully, making sure I was at a safe distance. “Chaos, I seek entrance into your lands. I need a home and from the look of, no offence, you look mildly weak after your fight.” I hoped those words wouldn’t earn me a kick to the skull. A bubble formed in my throat, making me want to laugh. A vein popped from my neck as I sustained the laugh. My laughter would get me into trouble one of these days. If Chaos didn’t accept me, I would go to Yarra, than to Riku. Maybe one of those stallions would accept me. “You are a legend Chaos, and I wish for nothing but to serve you.” My words danced from my lips as I said them. I had a way with words and usually got my way. My battle scars usually scared a stallion before I had to. A smile twitched at my lips and I could help my laugh. “Sorry, I’m not laughing at you.” “My name is Insane Laughter and as you can tell, I laugh a lot.
Character: Insane Laughter Words: 207 Status: Complete Comments: Smart ass xD Ok Lynxie.
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Post by lynx'' on Feb 4, 2009 9:28:11 GMT -5
CHAOS
[/font] You could spill a thousand words and none would mean a thing. [/color] He seemed uneasy, a good sign for me, yet I didn't let down my gaurd, I was angry and boy george he would find out if he put a step out of line. Another low snear came from my blood stained kissers as he spoke; in anger, i raised off my forelegs and lunged my neck out, jaws open and snapping shut close to his muzzle, i wouldn't hurt the idiot just yet. "You speak no words of wisdom fool." I hissed at him, tossing my skull to show my anger was rising more. Did he think i was weak? And most likely...did he even think for one second that he would get away with saying such things... I stepped closer to him, every minute my optics glowing with more fury. As he spoke again, it was my turn a smirk as a low cackle came from my kissers. Harks tipped backwards and myoptics narrowed to slits, a loud huff of carbon exhaling from my nostrils before i spoke inthe same low and twisted tone. "Save your pitiful words brute...you don't fool me." I hissed, my tail slapping hard against my rump as a bloodsucker landed there, hoping for some liquid. Another grumble came from my stomach as he laughed once more, followed by a sharp snort of dissproval. When he spoke, i couldn't help but roll my eyes and step closer to him, jaw opening and fangs reaching out to slice his tender flesh in a slow move. I stayed close to him, my hot breath on his neck, before lunging into his skin with bared teeth; pulling out and sidestepping away, neck arched in the way only arabians could do. "Shut your mouth." I snapped after he laughed once more, i tucked my skull into my chest so it bumped it gently, before i brought it forward to speak to him again. "It seems you have alot to learn..don't piss me off even more, keep your mouth shut and you might just live another day." I snarled, licking at my muzzle to free it of crimson. I eyed him, optics never leaving his ebon frame, he didn't look anything special..sure he had a few measly scars upon his frame, but what did that proove? I thought things over in my head, Intrepid could possibly decide if he would stay, but for now, he would rest on my judgment. "You think it's that easy hm? You think you can walk in and be given what you want? Wrong. You shall proove your skills, make me happy. Then, and only then will we discuss your staying here." I knew what his next comment would be.. "what do youwant me to do?" or something along those lines. I snorted with disaproval and shook my skull. Again, my deep dark pools rested upon his frame, i wanted to know all about him, if he had any sense, he would tell me his story, tell me his secrets and posessions...then he would be weak, i would learn to know everything about him, then, only then would i accept him. Character: Chaos Status: Complete Word Count: 529 Comments: I'l figure something out, for now, we'll just keep this going, but when Intrepid becomes king (after the herd post is finished) he will give him a rank and he will work for a better position, sound good? [/size][/color][/blockquote]
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Post by eclipsemidir on Feb 4, 2009 15:22:20 GMT -5
INSANE LAUGHTER
I snorted. Chaos expected me to ask? I shook my head. I wanted to impress Chaos but I didn’t want to be his bitch. I bit back a laugh to ensure that Chaos wouldn’t rip my muzzle off. “Fine Chaos, I will do something.” “But I won’t ask what.” I grinned at my last sentence. Bet he wasn’t expecting that, I snickered in my head. I could be such a smart ass sometimes. My ears pricked up. What was that I heard? I caught a glimpse of another stallion. It was a black stallion sneaking into Chaos’ and soon Interpid’s lands. My orbs squinted in this stallion’s direction. I knew a lot of the surrounding area but I don’t remember seeing this loner. I spit on the ground and muttered to Chaos. “There’s a stallion over in the weeds, looking at you.” I squinted at the stallion again. Damn! He moved. Where was he now? My orbs scanned the area. Where was he? My eyes bore into a large oak tree. I saw a black tail. There he was. My eyes turned back to Chaos. “Look, now the bastards behind the tree.” Chaos probably thought I was fucking with him. But I wasn’t. If only I could catch the stallion than maybe Chaos would believe me. Damn it! The stallion moved again. Where the hell was he now?
Character: Insane Laughter Words: 228 Status: Complete Comments: Sounds good. Damn moving horse.
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Post by lynx'' on Feb 5, 2009 11:55:15 GMT -5
CHAOS
[/font] You could spill a thousand words and none would mean a thing. [/color] Harks remained tipped back as i watched the intruder with angered eyes, he shook his head. I guess he wasn't as thick as he came across...however, when he seemed to be holding back yet another laugh, i scowled deeply and an irritated twitch appeared in my right eye.. "Very well. Go fetch me something nice.." I demanded, vocals strong and dark, i was twisted, even more so in my old age. Nares inhaled a deep breath of air, hoping to calm myself slightly, i didn't want to go back to the herd meeting even more riled than i had left, however, carbon was soon released as the scent of another unknown stallion wafted through my flared nostrils. With a loud roar, i half-reared and lunged forward at Insane, snapping my jaws shut, hoping to tear away his flesh. "He's followed you..you fool!" I hissed in hushed tones. Snapping my skull around and spotting the other ebon one immediatly. I had been living in this darkened hell hole for six years now, my optics had very much ajusted themselves to the gloomy light, therefore, spying intruders was no problem to me. I snorted, and barged past Insane, standing tall and in such a dominating stance "Get the fuck out my lands, brute." I snarled, clacking my teeth together and taking a few steps forward. The other brute took haste, i heard him thrashing about the bushes, looking for an escape route. I snorted and turned back to Insane, walking up to him with long steps. "Happy?" I snapped; slashing my tail as i walked past him. Character: Chaos Status: Complete Word Count: 280 Comments: bleh...sorry, it's not my best, i'm writing a story atm so not much horse muse xP [/size][/color][/blockquote]
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Post by eclipsemidir on Feb 6, 2009 7:26:15 GMT -5
INSANE LAUGHTER "I'm on the virge of insanity”
It impressed me how easily Chaos terrified the other stallion. Chaos was brave and strong, but old, and from what I heard he was planning on passing on the throne to Intrepid. I shook my head. Something nice… This frustrated me, what would be deemed “nice” by Chaos? I thought of someone, a lone mare that had told me her name was Suffering Rose. Maybe Chaos would accept her as “nice.” I wasn’t quite sure what nice meant anyways. No one had ever shown me any kindness. Not once in my life had anyone shown kindness towards me. I smiled and said… “All right Chaos, I think I have something that might impress you.” “I still had no clue what in the hell that meant.” I muttered as I stalked away from Chaos, to the outside of Hollow Woods. I paced myself, didn’t want to return to quickly to make Chaos think he had given me an easy task.
Character: Insane Laughter Words: 158 Status: Complete Comments: Fixed, happy Lynx?
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Post by lynx'' on Feb 8, 2009 13:30:19 GMT -5
CHAOS
[/font] You could spill a thousand words and none would mean a thing. [/color] Black optics were narrowed and set on the ebon one in front of me. I watched his eyes glow with admiration as the other scampered off without question and a small yet evil smirk came across my jaw line. When he spoke, i wasn't sure whether he really knew what he was doing and i let loose a low cackle. "Very well, Insane. then go, and do not return until you bring me a toy. Otherwise, i may use you.." i hissed, through slightly gritted teeth. I flung my cranium high into the air and gave an almost wild snort as he dissappeared into the depths of the forest on a hunt to make me happy. Why was it i came across as such a legend? Insane had come out with it, telling me i was his 'hero' almost. I shook my skull, thinking things through. It was never hard to become a hero, you just had to have faith and trust in yourself. Which was why, Intrepid, my son would go far. "Now don't be long now brute!" I shouted out, ending with a low pitched cackle that shivered inbetween the thick trunks. I never liked to be kept waiting... Character: Chaos Status: Complete Word Count: 226 Comments: Don't really know where this is going now... [/size][/color][/blockquote]
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Post by eclipsemidir on Feb 19, 2009 7:25:42 GMT -5
INSANE LAUGHTER "I'm on the virge of insanity”
I returned back to the spot where I had originally met Chaos. I was empty handed but I didn’t intend on speaking to Chaos, no I sought Intrepid. After all Chaos had stepped off the thrown Intrepid was now the master I sought. I would fight for Intrepid like known other. My ears twitched, as new habit I had picked up after wondering Midnight Acres from Summer to Fall looking for a “nice thing” Chaos required me to return with. My blood still boiled. Nothing would be nice enough for Chaos. “Intrepid, come out come out where ever you are,” A slight cackle escaped my lips as I called for the King stallion. My orbs scanned the area, looking for the son of Chaos. If Chaos showed up I would be angry beyond belief. I didn’t want to talk to that old stallion who gave up his thrown before he died. In my opinion, that was a sign of weakness. Just because he was weak and old didn’t mean he had to give up his thrown. I would never to tell Intrepid what the voices in my head said. He would tear me limb from limb for insulting his father. Still the stallion Rage, now weak, didn’t retire and hand over his territory to someone else. Instead he stayed near his warrior 24/7. I bit back another cackle. My insaneness sometimes even frightened me. If I could impress Intrepid than I would finally have a home, free of any dangers. I wouldn’t have to fight for my life, only Intrepid’s. “Oh Intrepid, why haven’t you appeared?” another cackle escaped my lips.
Character: Insane Laughter Status: Complete Words: 271 Comments: I wanted to make this longer but I couldn’t think of anything else to put…
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Post by lynx'' on Feb 19, 2009 13:57:56 GMT -5
CHAOS
[/font] You could spill a thousand words and none would mean a thing. [/color] It wasn't longer than a week before i scented Insane back in my lands; yet..I scented no other. It confused me to think why he would dare come back without a prize, ready to give to me. With an annoyed grunt, i tossed my skull, which was now free of blood from the fight, a few extra small scars were there, yet i looked well. Breathing was still hard, but it was barely noticable that i had fought not so long ago. With a loud snort, i took off in a flighty trot, i almost looked like i was gliding at a fast pace upon my land. I didn;'t make a single sound, years of practice had come in useful and all them training sessions given from my parents had paid off. I saw the bay anbout five minutes later and i charged out of the thick trees, audits snapped back into my forlock, i picked up speed and bared my stained ivories, sliding to a stop at the very last minute, tresses spilling over my narrowed optics. I snatched out at the bay brute, stamping my hoof firmly into the ground. "Why is it you call for my son and not myself. Correct me if i'm wrong, fool but didn't i send you out on a mission for me?" I snarled, vocals almost cracking with anger. Character: Chaos Status: Complete Word Count: 226 Comments: tred carefully... [/size][/color][/blockquote]
INTREPID
[/font] I hear them calling king. [/color] Black optics scanned the realm, my realm. My shaded silver figure blended nicely in with the thick fog that had formed. I walked aimlessly around, pretty relaxed, even for my deranged mind and soul; that was, until i heard voices, the voice of some stranger who called for me, then the angered voice of my father.I let a demonic rumble come from my throat and burst into a gallop, lifting my tail high and arching my neck, eyes showed nothing but anger as i burst into the small clearing where the bay and my father stood. "Tell me brute..just what would you want with me?" I hissed, confident vocals carried out in a warning tone for the intruder. I glanced across at my father, gave him a quick nod of greetings, before snapping my skull back to the bay and glaring at him with a dangerous look. Character: Intrepid Status: Complete Word Count: 147 Comments: not my best with him, but i'm running low on muse. [/size][/color][/blockquote]
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Post by eclipsemidir on Feb 19, 2009 16:04:42 GMT -5
INSANE LAUGHTER
I snorted towards Chaos. He thought I returned with nothing. It was true, I didn’t return with someone, I returned with information. I bowed to them both; despite the fact I only wanted to be with Intrepid. Honestly, I didn’t like Chaos but he was the father of someone I wanted to defend so I had to be nice to the brute.
“Chaos, Intrepid, I have returned with no one,” I stiffened ready to defend myself. “But I did return with information.”
I smirked; this would make their eyes pop. I wanted to surprise them. “Rage is weak, he lost to the brute Zarian, leaving him defenseless. He hides behind his one warrior now. Its best to attack in winter, his wounds will sting like hell fire.”
Character: Insane Laughter Status: Complete Words: 120 Comments: No muse <.<
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Post by lynx'' on Feb 20, 2009 9:59:47 GMT -5
CHAOS
[/font] You could spill a thousand words and none would mean a thing. [/color] My frame tensed up slightly when he snorted, i had to hold myself steady, i didn't want to attack this bay just yet. The only sound that could be heard was that of my teeth slowly grinding against eachother behind closed jaws and i gave a low grunt when he spoke. "Why have you come back Insane" I spat at him, rearing to half height and crashing my forehooves deep into the mossy substance underfoot. how dare he come back with something different from what i had sent him to do. I arched my neck, so much it bumped my chest a few times before i spoke again, vocals pushing out a snarled, demonic tone "Does it matter that the bastard is weak? Do you dout me or Intrepid to take him on when he is in full power? 'tis useless information Insane, your walking on string boy." My vocals dominated the small area we stood in and i let a loose snarl escape from my kissers. Character: Chaos Status: Complete Word Count: 168 Comments: it's okay...not very long but i haven't much to go by! [/size][/color][/blockquote]
INTREPID
[/font] I hear them calling king. [/color] I stood silent. I often did, i liked to observe things carefully before i spoke. Something i had inherited from my mother from birth, something which she had tought me to improve upon. as my father, although strong and confident, he often didn;t think clearly about problems or situations. I allowed my gaze to shift freely from my beloved father to Insane, harks tipped back slightly and body tensed, my bulging muscles twitching underneath my silver skin. When i was sure my father had finished, i steped forward, ushering the big chestnut backward, to let me in on the deal. "Tell me why you dare return to my lands with an incomplete task on your shoulders." I spoke loud and clear, my tones gave away no emtion but power. I was the most powerful one here now, not the useless bay, and not my mighty father. "Give my one good reason why i shouldn't kill you right now.." I hissed at him, now, my skull almost touching him, my optics locked onto his, the corner of my mouth curling in a dangerous snarl. I pushed forward, knocking my skull against his and grunted, stepped back and giving him the space he needed to talk. Character: Intrepid Status: Complete Word Count: 203 Comments: still naff for intrepid, normally his posts are 400+ [/size][/color][/blockquote]
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Post by eclipsemidir on Feb 20, 2009 15:37:31 GMT -5
INSANE LAUGHTER
My information was useless to them? I growled deep in my throat. My orbs shifted from each stallion. “I meant no disrespect, I just wanted to serve you and Chaos did give a specific thing he was looking for. He said “bring back something nice” wasn’t my information nice? I didn’t mean that you couldn’t take him at his full strength I just meant that he was weak and an easier target now.” My obsessive rambling would just slow my death. “I just wish to serve you. Give me a specific task and I shall do it.” I really wanted to serve under Intrepid or Chaos but I needed a specific target!
Character: Insane Laughter Words: 112 Status: Complete Comments: ;-; I’m working on a speech for Rage. ;-;
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Post by lynx'' on Feb 21, 2009 13:08:51 GMT -5
CHAOS
[/font] You could spill a thousand words and none would mean a thing. [/color] I took a deep breath. Attacking this bay brute would only make me suffer in the long run, i wanted my wounds to heal, and any quick movement only caused more discomfate and i didn't want that. so instead, my harks twisted backward, away from him, showing my displeasure of having him back upon my former land. When he spoke, my temper rose quickly and i snatched out with open jaws once more, hoping to catch the bay. "I meant a mare you idiot." I snapped. Snorting loudly and flicking my tail, turning away from him and speaking to him as i walked away through the dense forest "Don;t let me see you again unless your accompanied by a female." I demanded, crashing away through the bushes in an angry manner. Character: Chaos Status: Complete Word Count: 131 Comments: bleh, low muse for these guys atm...i have most for Disturbia, sorry. [/size][/color][/blockquote]
INTREPID
[/font] I hear them calling king. [/color] As my father walked away, i stepped forward to Insane, advancing on him almost like a wolf would a rabbit. My black optics glinted with silver streaks as a stray sun ray burst through the open topped trees and flashed into my eyes, making my glare even more so dangerous. I kept walking, even when i was close to him, expecting him to move back. back down I had never beofre met this brute but the first thing he would have to do was back down. "You heard my father, Insane. A mare, go fetch a mare. Now. don't you ever return until you have her captured." I growled, licking my lips in a warning of his punishment. I grunted loudly and reared up, almost to full height, my hooves slashing through the thick air, that i had become accustomed too. I returned to all fours and clacked my teeth close to him, boy he had a long, hard journey ahead of him if he ever wished to serve for me. Character: Intrepid Status: Complete Word Count: 171 Comments: ahaha, nasty bugger xP [/size][/color][/blockquote]
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