{ Make this W O R T H my while [Andrae]

[lynx'']

CHAOS

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So you want to dance, do you? Well i strongly suggest you read my rules first, sweet cheeks.

Lets say; four posts, i don't want this to get boring, One attack per post, one dodge overall. If you win; you take my princess back to your lands, careful, she might not agree to come nicely..but wait, i want a trophy for my hard work..If your good at something, never do it for free. your right eye sounds reasonable. I'd return the favour and say your welcome to take one of mine too. But i'm set on watching you carry your ass away in shame.

don't fuck up.

So, where you at tough guy? I'm here, standing on one leg, waiting; darling. Let this begin

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Andrae

Veni, vidi, vici.

I could feel the adrenaline rushing in my veins. The fight was... on! It was a male thing, the sheer thrill of battle. A smirk made its way to my features. I stepped forward and, with as much energy as I had, attempted to slash out at Chaos. I had aimed roughly for his side.
It was late spring and the summer was almost ready to take over. The warmth of the sun's rays touched me gently. For some reason they gave me more confidence when I took the first move of our little brawl. The image of my prize if I won flooded my mind and I cackled evilly as I thought what I'd do to her. This also helped me; it gave motivation.

[lynx'']

CHAOS

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I wasn't waiting long in the sanded terrain before hoof beats could be heard in the distance. Nares gently widened and i inhaled his definate scent. Andrae had arrived and was coming to wards me. Soon, his Golden pelt could be seen and i let a sly grin plaster to my jaw line; tossing my skull and prancing almost on the spot in excitement. It had been a while since my last fight; and i dearly hoped i hadn't lost my touch. Tail kinked at a 30 degree angle as he closed in on me; all the time, my black optics glaring down at him; i was slightly bigger, most definitely wiser, and most doughty stronger, yet i must admit, i had slight respect for him for trying.

Almost as soon as he had advanced, he turned and lashed at my right hand side with his hooves; the thud hit me squarely between my ribs and stomach and i gave an annoyed growl; tossing my skull once more and grind ed my teeth together in a warning tone; before setting off with an extended trot, circling the brute, coming in smaller and smaller on each complete turn. All the time my dark twisted optics settled on his body, drifting over his body, not keeping contact with any particular place as not to give away any clues to where i was going to attack.

With yet another annoyed growl; i dug my fore hooves deep into the ground, causing an immediate stop and i lunged forward, teeth baring, aiming for his throat. Wanting to keep a good long grip on his air pipes. Neatly side-jumping away from the golden bastard, I lowered my skull and extended my neck in a snake-like manner; teeth baring, waiting for this one to take his next move.

ooc
word count: 311
comments: not my best, hopefully they will get better.
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Andrae

Veni, vidi, vici.

Good, I got it right. I was young and this was my first fight. It was satisfing to know I made my move correctly.
Hmm, Chaos didn't seem to have any idea where to attack. Still I was careful; this might prove to be a big problem later. Ack! He bit down into my neck. Real deep. The pain seared on my nape. Just.... ignore it... that hurt. No, be tough, be a real tough boy and show your stuff. Show those darks you are made of something powerful. Yeah, baby. Good job.
With the burning pain rooting my on, I attempted to bite down on his ear. Odd move, I know. It was crazy, but fun.

[lynx'']

CHAOS

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I saw the bastard wince and couldn't hold back the demonic cackle that left my now bloodstained kissers. Ignoring the slight pumping feeling i had in my ribs, i let a low hiss escape them, giving another warning to him. This wasn't a fight it was a fucking ballroom dance competition!

I watched him carefully, he didn't have a clue, obviously, this was his first fight. Pity he had chose to do it with me. I kept that sly smirk spread across my features, however, a small frown was placed on my skull, watching for what he was doing next. Luckily for him, he caught me off guard, reaching up to bite at my ear what the fuck i sensed blood, but no, he hadn't bitten hard enough, just the tip of my hark was bleeding. I snorted with disgust at his move and didn;t take my time in reeling around to face him, rearing to full height, slashing my hooves three times in the air, falling down and thumping my fore hooves hard into the earth.

Harks were not visible, for they were neatly tucked into my mane, covering that with blood too. Now, i had created some space between us, i pounced forward, almost in a mountain lion move; dug my fore hooves deep into the sandy turf and spun my back end around, hoping to hit him with a powerful strike square in the chest. If i succeeded, he would bruise badly here, and breathing would perhaps be difficult.

Slashing my banner, i sidestepped around, glaring down at this idiot with narrowed black orbs, nostrils flared slightly to bring in more air, sand particles making their way into my lungs. Neck arched slightly, a foaming sweat started on my figure, the sun beaming down on my back overheated me slightly.


Character: Chaos
Word count: 319
Status: Complete
Comments: (Attack two)
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Andrae

Veni, vidi, vici.

Another tumult of pain shot through me. This time it was on my withers. Two on the left one and one on my right. I watched in a cold icy stare as Chaos swung his legs in a turn and then moved to the side before he could injure my lungs. They were the second most important organ I had; I could not risk to injure them because I needed them to breathe, to live. All this was in my subconsious.
I tried to give him a good sharp kick, muzzle outstretched and ivories bared, foam dropping.
My onyx lanterns hooked themselves to his own in a glare.

occ: muse is not extraordinary today.

[lynx'']

CHAOS

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A deep growl was released from within me as the brute turned quickly so my attack wasn't able to perform to the best of its ability. So, he had some sense, moving so his ribs took the blame, rather than his chest. With an angry snort, i picked up an easy two beat pace, a flashy style, as i was arabian. I circled him watching him and waiting for him to strike his third attack; hopefully, it would be one of some sense this time, this wasn't a fight and i was getting a little fed up.

He picked his moment well, his hinds reached up and cracked me square in the ribs. With a deep inhale of air, my harks shot back and eyes narrowed slightly, the pain in my ribs dieing a little, yet the difficulty in breathing was slightly annoying. I stopped my circle and faced him, a dangerous glint appearing in my black pools. slowly, i stepped forward; banner flicking from side to side, the sweat caking even more sand onto my dark chestnut body.

Teeth were bared, and i charged forward, skull lowered slightly, and as i closed in, jaws opened, yellow stained fangs reaching out to grip the tender flesh upon his muzzle; jaws clamped shut and i pulled back as hard as i could, hoping to bring half of his muzzle with me. hooves dug deep into the ground to avoid any resistance he might make. Eventually, jaws unlocked and i stepped back, an amused smirk spread across my jaw line.


Character: Chaos
Word count: 287 (not my best, sorry)
Status: Complete
Comments: (Attack three)...Andrae moved to avoid Chaos hitting his chest, that was your dodge, right?
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Andrae

Veni, vidi, vici.

I was tense, sweat dripping from my gold coat. A cool bath in Coco Bay seemed a good idea afterwards. No... after I imprisoned Lilith in Verita Mountain. Ooh, good idea. But concentrate and do your best. Look cool. Show them.
The moment that Chaos snapped out, my mind went blank. I didn't know what I was doing or why I was there. Then with the force that the bite was given, my brain started to work again. Grr, why did you do that? Why did you let that chestnut warlord take a piece of you? I felt the damage that was done. Part of my left muzzle was bloody.
I was tiring out slowly. My blood was all over me, and so was sand. With my little enthusiasm left, I had a go at biting Chaos's lower neck.

occ: yes, that was my dodge, and how come you keep adding attacks, XD?!

[lynx'']

CHAOS

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A loud, demonic laugh came willingly from my kissers when i pulled back. I half-reared and spat out pieces of flesh and blood from my mouth. I spun around to face him with an evil glare. I could easily tell he was tiring, more so than me...he was drenched in a sweat, his sides heaving in and out, whilst mine only moved slightly. My black optics shifted over his dirty golden pelt and an amused smirk spread its way across my jaw line.

Yet the idiotic brute still seemed to hold determination in his eyes. Pffft. He sure was an idiot. If he won this 'fight' i would seek out my twisted revenge, if I won, he sure would know about it. Lifting my pillars up high, i pranced forward, neck arched in the way only arabians could, tail kinked high, pools glaring down with a dangerous glint, shining an almost silver colouring as the suns rays hit them. He lashed out to bite me; his jaw aiming for my lower neck, but i was on a role; quickly; i reared, bringing my fore legs up high so his jaw would hopefully smash against my legs; i raised my slim frame higher still, bringing myself up to full height, striking out with my forehooves hoping to catch his face.With a loud thud; i returned to the ground and waited for the outcome of my attacks.


Character: Chaos
Word count: 274
Status: Complete
Comments: Final Attack, after this post, please,Azzy or Druid will you judge this fight? Thanks. good look patch (EW i hate this post...)
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results
chaos x andrae
for LILITH.

overall - nice fight; short, simple, to the point.

scores

CHAOS.

attack & response one - pretty good. first thing I noticed were the grammar errors.. a lot of them. make sure to spell check, and check the grammar usage. otherwise, the post was nice; the injury response was decently realistic, and the attack was also realistic. not bad. :]
attack & response two - grammar was better. i saw less semi-colons, and the sentances flowed better. injury response was pretty decent, and the attack was well planned, and well played out.
attack & response three - very good. injury response was weak, and not played out very well, and the attack was strange, but the feel was very 'dark.'
attack & response four - sort of contradicting to your prior posts, but the post was nice. no injury, no attack. make sure to watch grammar.

ANDRAE.

attack one - decent. attack was very realistic, no injury response. very short; it lacked the extra details. very simple, but a very good post none the less.
attack & response two - again, very short. i did like the use of having the point of view be in YOUR point of view. made it seem realistic. attack was odd, and i didn't really 'understand' it, but the post was put together well. :] good job.
attack & response three - no injury, well played out. attack was odd; there was no specified spot for the attack, leaving a gap in the post. not as good as your other posts.
attack & response four - meh, okay. the injury wasn't played out well, nor was the attack, and it lacked detail. probably the worst post that you did for the fight, but it wasn't horrible.

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wounds & scars

CHAOS; bruised ribs (impossible to run for extended times.) scar on right ear (no physical effect.) scraped lungs (affects breathing ability for one year.) attack four was dodged.
ANDRAE; scar on lower neck (short-breathed for two seasons.) attack two was miss. scarred muzzle (cannot smell or scent for two seasons.) broken jaw (heals after one season, stops hurting after three more seasons.)

winner
chaos - for overall post quality, although it was close.

you may continue the post now, playing the injuries and consequences.

[lynx'']

CHAOS

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So it had been decided. I would be the one claiming and he loosing. I was tired; my ribs ached, breathing was becoming difficult. My gaze shifted from the surrounding area to the brute infront of me, a discusted glare forming on my skull; i looked down at him, arching my neck a little and breathing in a deep breath; wincing slightly at the short sharp pain that surged through my lungs. I kept my black optics locked with his; and kissers parted in a speech toward him. "Well; it looks like i keep my princess; Andrae and it looks like you loose an eye. Here, bastard." I summonded him to come to me, i had power over him now.

I watched and waited for him to pluck up the courage to come over; all the time my eyes locked on his stained golden frame, but my mind wandered elsewhere; back to Hollow Woods with my family, all there, waiting for me to return, little did they know the news they would hear.



Character: Chaos
Word count: 212
Status: Complete
Comments: Lilith is staying! Thank god lol. This won't take long Patch, just need to RP out where Chaos takes his prize (Andrae's eye)
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Andrae

Veni, vidi, vici.

Defeat was an odd feeling; it left the sensation of being kicked in the stomach. And worse. Chaos won, and therefore had the right to leave me one-eyed. I hurt all over but didn't really want to admit it to myself.
Maybe it served me right for being so silly as to challenge a stallion with much more years to his credit and experience to.
I was almost horrified at the thought of going back to my queen Venom one-eyed and battered up too. But she'd understand, and so would the others, few as they were.
I walked forward and awaited my punishment, trembling with rage. I nearly made up my mind to break his leg but decided against it; that would be foolish as well as against the rules of war.


occ: My posts are always short cause I hate long ones, XD. I nearly feel bad for Andrae. He's almost me.

[lynx'']

RAWR *chaos pokes Andrae's eye out with a spork* okay, well done Patch it added a bit of style and spice to the site

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