RosaLuna
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Post by RosaLuna on Mar 8, 2009 14:24:15 GMT -5
Isadora [/color] With a will of steel and a heart of gold.[/color] The roaring of the water falls echoed in her ears, drowning out all other noise save for the liquid rapidly hitting the icy waters underneath it. If she listened closely, she could hear the sound of the ice in the stream leading out of the water fall cracking under the strain of so much water. Of course, it wouldn't melt totally until spring, but even the small melting that was starting a little in the mountains was increasing the flow of water and the pressure put on the ice.
Isadora ambled through the cold snow, her hooves leaving clear tracks in the frozen water as she walked towards the waterfall. She could see the caves beyond, but she was not interested in them at the moment. Some of the grass beneath the snow smelled pretty good and she wanted to get at that first.
The large Gypsy Vanner mare stopped on the edge of the icy pool, feeling a little of the cold spray from the water fall splashing into the pond. She shook her large head and crashed a hoof into the ice at the edge of the pond, opening up an area for her to drink. All four feet planted firmly on the ground, she lowered her head for a drink and came up with a cold, dripping maw, but her thirst was slaked. Isa turned her attention now to the snow beneath her white-feathered hooves, pawing the snow away to reveal the green shoots striving to survive. The black and white horse lowered her head again, this time to tear at the small shoots growing despite the weather conditions. Her long black and white mane brushed the top of the snow, a few flacks sticking to the coarse material of her mane before she pulled up her head again, listening while chewing the small amount of grass. The water fall, however, drowned out all other sound.
Finally, Isadora left the area by the pool to go around the edge of the cold waters to the caves, where the water fall could still be heard but it didn't completely block all other sound. She had never been one to /need/ a stallion or a herd, however the prospect of being a loner all her life did not appeal to her. She had heard this was the place to come to find a home, and hopefully no dark horses would be venturing here today, for their sake, not hers. Should any try to take her unwillingly, they would find she was not one to come along without a fight. She stood awkwardly in the center of the caves, looking around. "This is a waste of my time,"[/b] she muttered under her breath, although she was willing to wait here for awhile.[/size][/center]
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Post by ! CHOCOLATE BUNNY ! on Mar 8, 2009 16:00:55 GMT -5
SETH
He's A Fighter
My painted legs carried me far until I stopped. I looked around and I saw an old tree that I could take my anger out on. i galloped up to it and I bucked it. The old tree wobbled and fell backwards, Knocking into another tree. I laughed at the old wimpy tree and I continued to search for a mare that I could call mine. I wanted the mare to be just like me, A fighter. I wanted her to be a nice and sweet mare who had kick ass fighting skills. I was so deep in my thoughts that I smashed into a tree. I fell to the ground and my laugh filled the air. I heard a mares voice and I scrambled to my feet. I cantered toward the voice and I saw her. She was truly beautiful in her own way. Her looks were really nice but I cared about personality and I could see by just looking at her actions and her eyes that her personality was the same as mine. I could feel the blood from smashing my head against the tree trickle down my forehead, Making my white blaze turn a light shade of dark red. I blushed a bright red and I looked at her with my two light blue eyes.
"I'm sorry if I interrupted you. I'm Seth. What's your name?" I asked her. I felt the blood in my mouth as I spoke to her and I felt embarrassed. I had a feeling the mare saw me smash right into the tree. "I just smashed into a tree and I started bleeding. I hope you don't mind the blood, Just tell me if you feel uncomfortable and I will try to wipe it off" I told her, Chuckling when I said that I smashed into a tree. I looked at her coat and I thought she looked like me a little bit.
The Fighter;; Seth Fighting Words;; 349 The Fights He was in;; Hope you don't mind me coming in here. He's a little clumsy, Okay really clumsy. Hope you like the post!
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Post by eclipsemidir on Mar 8, 2009 16:20:44 GMT -5
RAGE "Call me the furious king."
My grey carcass sprinted through the area I was so familiar with. Two mares had already rejected me, refusing to join my herd. Chaos’ letter had arrived to Sunset Meadows telling me to stock up on tasty treats, as I called them, for him to take if he won. Of course I got my own tasty treat in return if I won. His daughter Nox, a beautiful young dark mare of Hollowed Woods, was my prize if I won. I slid to a stop, almost descending over the waterfall. I was close to the edge and I saw two figures. A mare and a stallion, the stallion seemed friendly. He didn’t possess the look of the others. The first mare he had just left because Chaos was there. The second he would take after defeating Cory, a young stallion who dared threatened me. I would probably have my assassin take care of him. Gasper, my assassin, was like a son to me. But my heir and General, Abacuss, was closer to my heart because he was older and wiser. Gasper was still a colt, in my eyes, and a dark so I didn’t fully trust him. I treaded lightly, inching closer and closer to the pair. “Hello, beautiful, he spoke to the mare; I am Rage, King of Sunset Meadows. And you are?”
The furious words: 223 The furious character: Rage The color he sees: Red My words: No comments…
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Post by RosaLuna on Mar 9, 2009 17:47:01 GMT -5
Isadora [/color] With a will of steel and a heart of gold.[/color] Isadora heard Seth before she saw him, and stepped a little out of the cave to watch him kick down a tree and then walking into another tree. He laughed and the sound carried over the roar of the waterfall. He looked...just like her! It was amazing the striking resemblance that they had to each other, but their markings were definitely different.
He turned towards her and started heading her way, and now she could see the thin trickle of blood that had made its way down his forehead as a result of him smashing into the tree. He seemed clumsy, but he didn't appear to be a dark horse. Still, Isa remained wary as he approached, although she appreciated that he apologized for the intrusion. When he spoke, she didn't detect any hint of malice in his tone, so she decided to trust him at the moment. "Oh, you're not interrupting anything at all," she said quietly with a small smile, feeling a little awkward. She was a big, stocky Gypsy Vanner mare after all who had no experience with stallions and was better suited for the battle field or strategy then finding a mate or a home.
"My name is Isadora, it is very nice to meet you, Seth," she replied, before her ears snapped back and her nostrils flared. She could hear the pounding of hooves above the cave and the scent that came down was distinctly dark. "I believe we have company," she growled under her breath, narrowing her eyes at the other stallion. This one she immediately distrusted right away, especially when he called /her/ beautiful. Of course, she believed that they had some good in them, but she wasn't willing to test that theory at the moment when a light stallion was standing before her, looking just like her. "Isadora." Her reply was curt, much less friendly than when she had told Seth. "I would leave if I were you, Rage. I've heard of you."
The Character:Isadora Word Count:349 Comments:Eclipse, you should really write only in one tense. You are going back and forth between 'I' and 'he'. Which is it? Also, I would like to add that you might have better luck going after dark horses, Isadora is a light horse and will fight Rage without a second thought because he is dark. So she's probably going with Seth.[/center]
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Post by ! CHOCOLATE BUNNY ! on Mar 9, 2009 20:53:49 GMT -5
SETH
Harder, Better, Faster, Stronger!
I smiled at her when she said her name. Isadora. I just loved that name and I just loved the way she looked. I looked at her with my two light blue eyes. The way she looked at me was a warm feeling. I spoke to her and I felt like I have known her my whole life. "Okay, I didn't want to be barging in on you like that light who is afraid to fight the darks if a war breaks out. I would fight him in a second if I had to just for you, Isadora" I said to her, Moving closer and nuzzling her neck with my muzzle. I smiled at her as I flirted with her. I looked up at the sky and saw my old mother, America. I smiled at her and she nodded and smiled. I looked at Isadora then back at America but she was gone. I looked at the stallion that just came up to me and Isadora. I snarled at him and I stood next to her protectively, Trying to tell Rage that I was with her and I was going to claim her so he could just leave us alone. I listened to her sharp words at Rage and I smirked at him. I smiled at her and I felt the blood drying on my forehead.
The Fighter;; Seth Fighting Words;; 241 The Many Fights;; Hehe. He's so cute! Hope you like my post!
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Post by eclipsemidir on Mar 10, 2009 5:26:28 GMT -5
ooc: Rage isn't a dark horse, hes king of a light land.
Post Coming!
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Post by eclipsemidir on Mar 10, 2009 5:42:44 GMT -5
RAGE "Call me the furious king." I couldn’t help but laugh when the light mare called him a dark. A dark claiming a light land, you would have to be rather foolish to think that. I placed another foot forward, slowly walking more and more towards the mare. I intended on taking this mare home or fight for her. I wasn’t about to leave empty handed again.“Lovely mare, I am a Light King, my attitude may be dark but I am light. I am the opposite of the spawn I am fighting.”I needed to convince her that I was a better chose than the colt before her. I was a grey brute, a noble war horse. Sure I had lost a fight to the bastard Zarian but the little bugger had his evil side, Carnage. I stepped forward again. I needed the mare. I wanted to produce children, an heir, rather than Abacuss. To do that, I needed as many children as I could spawn.
“Come with me mare, this foolish colt has no home awaiting you. I do, full of other semi friendly mares and two soldiers that will protect my mares with their lives. Don’t forget I will too.”
If the home part didn’t convince her then she obviously wanted to go homeless. The colt standing next to me wouldn’t know how to take care of a mare. He couldn’t even offer her a home. That was something that irked me, stallions with no homes taking all the mares.
The furious words: 247 The furious character: Rage The furious color: Red The furious comments: None to speak.[/color][/size]]
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RosaLuna
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Post by RosaLuna on Mar 10, 2009 16:48:45 GMT -5
Isadora [/color] With a will of steel and a heart of gold[/size] Isadora saw the way that Seth looked at her, like she was the most special mare in the whole word, the only one. Her heart did a little skip-jump and she had to look away. If she could have, she would have been blushing, but she composed herself quickly to look at Rage. She had taken an instant dislike to him the second she saw him, while Seth seemed to be the far more honorable stallion here. He made her practically speechless, especially when he nuzzled her.
"Forgive me, your highness," Isadora said mockingly, not caring whether he was light or not; he seemed to be dark to her. "By your reputation and attitude, I automatically assumed you were dark." Isa didn't like the way he was looking at her. To him, she was just another womb to bear children, another mare to call his own. To him, she was property. Isadora was no stallion's property.
Her ears flattened again for a moment before she spoke again, glancing at Seth. Her heart was telling her to go with him and her head was rebelling against the idea of being claimed at all. Still, that's what she had come here for, to find a herd. Or at least companionship. Rage was offering her a home with 'semi-friendly mares' but Seth was just offering her himself. "I'm afraid your 'semi-friendly' home holds no appeal for me. And I don't need protecting, I can protect myself well enough without you or your 'soldiers' help," she said to Rage, narrowing her gaze at him.
The Character:Isadora Word Count:258 Comments:She might fight right along with Seth...XD[/center]
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Post by eclipsemidir on Mar 10, 2009 16:56:03 GMT -5
Ooc: Thats it I'm out of this post.. Isadora is to much of a bitch.
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Post by RosaLuna on Mar 10, 2009 17:21:15 GMT -5
ooc~ Um, okay, sorry... [/center]
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Post by ! CHOCOLATE BUNNY ! on Mar 10, 2009 18:29:18 GMT -5
OOC;; So should I post asking Isa if she wants to be claimed by Seth?
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Post by RosaLuna on Mar 10, 2009 18:37:57 GMT -5
ooc~ Sure, go ahead. Where would they go? [/center]
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Post by ! CHOCOLATE BUNNY ! on Mar 10, 2009 18:38:58 GMT -5
OOC;; Ummm . . . I'm not sure but if Seth could claim one more mare, He could challenge for a land. My post is coming soon!
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Post by RosaLuna on Mar 10, 2009 19:06:42 GMT -5
ooc~ Okay, well, whenver you're ready, post for claiming Isa. [/center]
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Post by ! CHOCOLATE BUNNY ! on Mar 10, 2009 19:24:29 GMT -5
SETH
Harder, Better, Faster, Stronger!
I smiled at Isadora as she spoke to Rage. I moved so close to her that our bodies were pressed up against each other. I looked at her and Nuzzled her neck again. I spoke to her. Wishing to claim her. "Darling Isadora, Do you wish to be claimed? If so, I'm happy to claim you, But that's your choice and I can't control you" I said to her, Smiling at her. I looked around, Wondering if Rage left us alone. I didn't see him so I assumed that he just got up and left. I looked at her with a strong feeling of love in my eyes. I felt like we we've been friends for ages and we just decided to try our luck at being mates. I nuzzled her cheek then I went to nuzzle her black and white forehead. When I pulled my muzzle away from her forehead, I saw America's face in the sky again. I smiled up at her and she smiled back. She nodded at me as she faded away into the blue sky. I turned my attention back to Isadora and I waited for her to say yes or no.
The Fighter;; Seth Fighting Words;; 225 Fights He's Been In;; He's so cute! I just adore him. I hope you like the post and I hope Isadora says yes to him.
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