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Post by dakota on Aug 12, 2008 17:43:03 GMT -5
she swishes her tail and holds her neck high as she walks elegantly through the land she looks for a clearing so she can eat. she lowers her neck and nibbles at the glossy green grass coved in water due. she watches as the sun begins to rise and fills the sky with a pink color and swirls around. she has been alone for so long she is yearning for company. her eyes flicker closed and she begins to daydream's about being with a herd. her silver Cote shimmers in the light and she holds her head up and smiles to herself. her eyelids flicker back open to show her beautiful deep brown glimmering eyes. she listens as the wind blows gently through the trees. her main begins to blow about softly. then she lets out a quiet nicker and sighed to herself. she chews at the grass and seems distracted and out of place. she wonders if she will ever fined some company or if she will be alone forever. she was growing tied of never sleeping for fear she might be attacked and it was hard to feed when you had to be on look out as well. she pricks her ears and listens for some one half hoping she would hear someone but she could only hear the birds chirping as they filled the sky.
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Trill Stalker
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In the Beginning there was darkness. Then light was made. So we could see the truth about our-self.
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Post by Trill Stalker on Aug 13, 2008 8:47:06 GMT -5
(Sory for not replying to you sooner, I have been away on vacation and had not a chance to get on a computer but I am now here for you =) ) Zarian I was slowly walking around the perimeter of my land, taking in all the scents and sights to make sure that my territory had not been breached by any stray stallions or predators when a soft nicker entered my ears from the slight breeze that played among the knee length green grass. The nicker was not one that I reconized, my long muscled legs instictivly started to follow where the scent had come from.
The sun was high in the light blue sky and a single bird was flying on the worm air curents. A few tree's were scatered about my land casting long dull shadows underneath them. And underneath one of those ancient beings I saw the intruder. The unknown horse was not a stallion as I had feared, it was a very feminine mare. I tilted my head to the side slightly in question, why would a mare enter my lands of her own free will? Well I would soon find out the answer to my own question.
When my dark hooves had taken me close enough to the mare that I could smell her sweet fragrence I stoped. I spoke slowly and clamly so as to not scare the mare because I highly doubted she had senced me coming up from behind. I ask you mare what you are doing in my terra. |
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Post by dakota on Aug 13, 2008 17:53:55 GMT -5
The mear turned to face the voice she looks a little bit started then she flickers a soft elegant smile. then she replies " i didn't know anyone owned this land" not relay answering his question she stands tall and fixes her Hazel brown eyes on his. she hadn't been in the presence of a norther horse for so long she was slightly glad to see him even if he was a stallion. she swishes her tail calmly and stands still. her coat gleaming in the light as she inspects him as he stands there she takes a steep in his direction and faintly smiles as her eyes dart past him as she stairs at the sky and land around her. her eyelids batter gently as she try's to stop the sun from seeping into her brown soft eyes. she watches the morning dew dance on the grass blades before letting her head fall to meet the grass. she nibbles hungrily at the grass due to not have properly eaten in a while. her tail flutters in the breeze and her mane sways about on her long thin neck. she keeps her eyes fixed on the stallion and continues to eat the velvety green grass. her ears pricked listening for danger as she was still unsure of the stallion and his intentions but she assumed being a stallion he would be after one thing that bothered her slightly but she pushed her thoughts to the back of her mined and lets her eyes flicker over the stallion.
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Post by Trill Stalker on Aug 13, 2008 19:08:52 GMT -5
(that post is not even 100 words...)
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Post by dakota on Aug 14, 2008 2:36:02 GMT -5
(sorry my mum came in and i had to finish upbecause im not realy aloud on the computer but i have fixed my post. sorry for that)
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Post by Trill Stalker on Aug 14, 2008 15:39:13 GMT -5
(can you take away that picture?) Zarian I reaised one eyebrow in question. "How did you not know that this land was not owned by anyone? The perimeter reaks of my sent." I had ben king of this land for the greater half of a year and the land was now becoming acostome to my owning it. Silent Woods was mainly covered in ancient tree's that reached high into the sky, but where we stood now there was only sparce tree's and rolling green hills. A small river gurggled off to the right and the sun loomed above us pelting my coat with its hot rays and making me wish I was near the saphire water to drink.
I knew that I had to do something about this new mare so I spoke. "If you desire to stay in these lands then you are to become mine, I can offer you protection and all the basic nesesities of life." My parents had raised me in two very different ways, my father wanting me to take after the dark and fight my way through life. While my mother had brought me up as a light with great expectations, she wanted me to be chovenistic and kind to those in need. But I had not been able to adapt to eather sides and I found that I had a split personality sometimes. Today my darker shadow seemed to want to come out and play. "Or you can leave this land and fend for yourself out in the wild." If she chose the later of the choices then I knew that my darker side would urge me to chace after her and force me to take her.
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Post by dakota on Aug 14, 2008 16:36:51 GMT -5
Her eyes flicker over the stallion then she says "i guess i just didn’t notions your sent" she lies then strides elegantly towards him to show she had no fear of the stallion. she walks around him once inspecting him then smiles softly at him and says "what is your name" as she swishes her tail and stands in front of him. She questions herself if she should tell him the truth of why she came hear but decides not to. She batters her eyelids softly and inhales the cool air. She begins to walk away but something makes her stop and turn back towards him and say “well I don’t know my father and my mother died after I was born so I didn’t really know them” she doesn’t know why she tells him she had never really talked about it though it haunted her so it just felt right to tell him. She walks back up to him and watches as his eyes glint at her. Her gentle breths spread around her and she stands looking tall and beautiful yet she seemed to look smaller compared to the stallion. She swishes her tail about elegantly and grins to herself.
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Post by dakota on Aug 18, 2008 11:18:19 GMT -5
(please reply i have been wating for a long time)
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Post by Trill Stalker on Aug 18, 2008 11:45:00 GMT -5
Zarian I could tell that the mare had lied to me about not knowing this land reeked of my sent, this mare apparently wanted to play with me. She proved my thoughts by stroding closer to me and making a slow circle around me, checking out every aspect of my muscled body. The mare smiles and her face lights up making me see her as beautiful. "Zarian." I answer her question, voice slightly husky. The teasing mare swishes her tail in front of me and my nostrils fill with the fresh scent of desire, making my own hormones go crazy.
I didn't feel pitty for the mares next words because with my experiences with parents I just felt like it was better sometimes to be with out. "Sometimes being without parents is a good thing." The mare walks back to stand in front of me, I can't help but smile slowly down at her.
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Post by dakota on Aug 18, 2008 17:26:26 GMT -5
the mear looks deeply at him as she feels her hart begin to race not being able to help herself she move close and gently nudges his shoulder just to check that he is rely there right in front of her because he seemed to good to be true. she smiles to her self and leaves her nose to his shoulder. then says
" i supposer probably right". her sent fills the air around her but she doesn't mined. she swishes her tail as her eyes smile at him then she says "i cant be bothered playing games with you so i will just say what i am thinking. i think i might be your s as long as you wont me" she says swishing her tail right in front of his nose. knowing he wont be able to resist her, but she doesn't wont him to,she wonted to be his. She smirks and watches him closely hoping he will wont her. She had never been truly wonted by anyone before. She nudges his shoulders gently and looks up at him as she Waite's for his reply. Her eyes glimmering with hope. She fells the sun beating down on her back. She smiles at him as he swishes her tail irritably as a bug bites her leg she snorts and moves closer to him without realizing it.
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Post by Trill Stalker on Aug 19, 2008 16:01:05 GMT -5
(When you edit your post there is spell check, and it would be better for me to play off of you if you didn't start all of your sentences with She.) Zarian
In The Throws Of Desire My eyes flutter close as the wind brings the mares scent fresh into my nostrils and into my mind. She moves closer to me I can feel her body heat like a hot summers day, it relaxes me and I find myself moving towards her like she is a light from the darkness that had kept me cold for so long. There was only one problem though. "I never did get your calling." It just seemed wrong to want to mate with someone when you didn't even know there name. I almost lose it when the mare speaks again because she states that she would be mine for as long as I wanted. "I highly doubt I will ever let you go." My voice was ruff and husky coming from deep within me.
It had been a long time since I had touched another in a sexual way and this mare was calling to all of my scenes driving them crazy with desire. The touch of the femme was more then I could handle at this moment in time, I wasn't like the other stallions though, taking anything that was given to them freely. I needed to know someone before I just up and f*cked them. I took a step back from the femme lessening the ragging desire but not keeping my gaze from telling the truth of how much I wanted her.
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Post by mear on Aug 20, 2008 3:03:08 GMT -5
(sorry my computer has crashes and im on my sisters compuet and it wont let me log on my acount)
i stand up strate and take a step clocer to tease you. my eyelids fluttring softly as i say "Dakota" in a soft sweet voice. i notice my sent begining to tempt you. i smirk softly then says "it looks like im all yours then" as i move clocer to let my sent make you wont me even more.
i swish my tail sofly and look up at you wondring what you are thinking.my deep brown eyes capture you in them longingly. my gaze drifts over the land as i look at my new home. a sudden tierdness sweeps over my body. i ignore it for the time being and focus back on the stallion.
i smile softly and move cloce to him as my side rubs softly agenst him, partly tesing him and partly not minding if he did somthing to her.
she touches her musel to his muscular sholder and smirks as her eyes dance over his incredibuly hansom face then i say "i am yours now so there is no need to be shy".
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Post by dakota2 on Aug 20, 2008 16:06:58 GMT -5
(i had to make a new acount because it wont let me on my old one on this computer just reply to my message)
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Post by Trill Stalker on Aug 20, 2008 17:07:17 GMT -5
(Well not to be too much of a bother but can you edit your reply? I edited some of your post for you so that you can get an idea for what I mean. and I put some other tips into your post for you.)
I stand up straite and take a step closer to the bloke letting my wormth seep into him. Fluttering my eye's softly I say in a sweet voice. "Dakota" Noticing that my musky scent was playing with the stallions desire i smirk softly and say. "it looks like im all yours" I dare to move even closer, allowing my scent to fill his every breath.
Looking up at Zarian with wide expression filled eye's I wonder what he is thinking about me. Describe the land and what you see, my gaze drifts over the land as i look at my new home. tell me why you are tiered, a sudden tierdness sweeps over my body. i ignore it for the time being and focus back on the stallion.
i smile softly and move cloce to him as my side rubs softly agenst him, partly tesing him and partly not minding if he did somthing to her.
she touches her musel to his muscular sholder and smirks as her eyes dance over his incredibuly hansom face then i say "i am yours now so there is no need to be shy".
Black = Is the part of the post I edited
Red = The part of your post that you can describe a lot more
Yellow = you mixed up she and i a lot and that is not atractive
Other = please fix your spelling aswell
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Post by dakota2 on Aug 21, 2008 3:08:14 GMT -5
(I'm sorry it was hard to think at 3:00am hear. but sorry anyway. i fixed up my post i hope it is ok and thank you for the advice. )
i stand up strait and take a step closer to you tease you as my warmth soaks into your side. my eyelids fluttering softly as i say "Dakota" in a soft sweet voice. i notice my sent was beginning to tempt your desirer as smirk softly then say "it looks like I'm all yours then" i Dare to get closer letting my sent swarm your nostrils, forcing you to breath it in.
i swish my tail softy and look up at zarian with wide expression filled eyes. wondering what you are thinking about me.my deep brown eyes capture you in them longingly.then my gaze drifts over the land the tall trees caressing the lush green grass as the sky retching out to the land with its light blue body. the sound of the wind swaying the trees as the land comes to life filles my ears. fallen leaves dance over the floor as they pass among the bushes and through the long thin juicy blades of grass i hold the image in my mind as greet my new home.
a sudden tiredness sweeps over my body. i feel my muscles drooping inside me. living alone and never being able to sleep due to fear of predators attacking me, had tied me out, it seems i had only let myself notice it now. i ignore it for the time being and focus back on the stallion thinking this is my main priority now and there will be plenty of time to rest later.
i smile softly and move close to you letting my side rubs softly agents you, partly to tease you and the dark side of me didn't mined if you did something to me because i had been alone so long i yearned for affection and attention from another.
i touches my soft mussel to your muscular shoulder and smirks as my eyes dance over your incredibly hansom face then i say
"i am yours now so there is no need to be shy"as if i am giving myself to you.
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